http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5298597/1/Damned_If_You_Do
Word Count: 6,440
Official Description: One-Shot for the “Love For The Unloved” Contest. Lauren Mallory might be high maintenance, but she has her reasons. Lauren/Jessica SLASH. AU.
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MsKathy says: One of the things I love most about Damned If You Do is the way Kristen Nicole captures that youthful nervousness about sexuality. Moments like this, at a seventh grade sleepover:
Am I thinking about her… boobs?
The way Lauren’s character is written, you can’t help but be sympathetic to her plight. She takes her inner struggle and turns it back out as anger and aggression, something that happens a lot in life.
Lauren’s love of Jessica was built and paced extremely well, and the night of prom, Jessica decides to go over to Lauren’s house after Mike breaks up with her. The inner thoughts of poor Lauren just kill me every time, ie:
Her boobs looked like they were about to spill right out the top, and they drew my eyes like magnets. Damn it damn it damn it, look at her face.
It’s something I could honestly find myself thinking, and so the giggles were a little hard to contain.
Jessica catches Lauren in the middle of, shall we say, less than innocent computer activities. Imagine her surprise when Jessica wants to see more.
Even when the girls get down and dirty, realism is not checked at the door, as Jessica worries about tasting gross.
Sexytimes ensue, and then we’re left with this:
I waited nervously, positive that she was now going to collect her things and go home. My heart was thumping erratically in my chest and my eyes burned, ready to shed buckets of tears.
You’ll just have to read it to find out if Jessica leaves and breaks Lauren’s heart or not. This is one of my favorite pieces of femme slash, a very overlooked genre in this fandom. Give it a try, I know you’ll love it.
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