Detours by aciepey

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5016247/1/Detours
http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=9988

Official Description: Bella meets the gang in Forks when she is on her latest assignment as a travel nurse. She loves her nomadic lifestyle, or does she? Is there something, or someone who can convince her to put down roots? AH Canon pairings

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TwiSherry says: When I first met my online sis, Aciepey in the Twilighted threads, we were both enthralled in another story, and we realized we must have be long lost sis’ because we agreed on everything. At the time, neither of us felt like we were writers in the least, so when she told me she had written a chapter for her first fic, I was very excited. But, now that we are nine chapters into this puppy I want to scream from the rooftops to get everyone to read it. So, when I was asked to do the guest rec for Detours, I was jumping up and down.

Detours introduces us to Bella, a traveling nurse, who enjoys her life plan of setting foot in each state before she settles down. Forks is her 13th assignment and she usually stays for about six months in each place. She has become a pro at moving, acclimating, and then moving on again. Because she is so used to this lifestyle, it is easy for Bella to make friends. The house she is renting from Rosalie, introduces her immediately into the Cullen clan, where she is instantly drawn into a relaxed and fun friendship with Rosalie, Emmett, Alice, and Jasper, who all happen upon her on moving day. As good neighbors do, they offer to help and she invites them all back for dinner later that week to thank them.

When Bella finds out that her best friend, Jake, is going to ask his girlfriend to marry him, it makes her question her whole life plan. She wonders what she is really looking for out of life, whether she is holding herself back from finding someone, and after experiencing the feelings of joy from spending only one day with the Cullens, she starts desiring to belong to a group herself. She ponders whether her mother has been right all of these years, and perhaps the independence she has prided herself on, has only been a way to isolate herself.

Enter Dr. Edward Cullen, and what a mighty fine entrance it is.

I made my way down the hall to the call room. It was very typical. Two sets of bunk beds, an alarm clock, a closet, a bathroom. I turned to lock the door and then put the fresh clothes on one of the beds. I reached for the hem of my soiled shirt and had taken it off when the bathroom door opened. My jaw hit the floor as I blushed and gawked at the god-like being that was standing in the doorway, still wet from his shower and one of those standard issue hospital towels slung low on his perfect hips.

As awkward as this first encounter could be they are instantly drawn to one another and even end up flirting.

“Bye, Bella,” he said, opening the door. Then he suddenly turned and winked at me. “You might want to lock this door. You never know who might come walking in on you.” He let the door close behind him after giving me another one of those crooked smiles.

I rested my back against the door and slid down to the floor, locking it on the way down. That was one of the most embarrassing and thrilling moments of my life. Edward Cullen was indeed a very good looking individual. He was checking me out. Dare I say flirting?

Both Edward and Bella are pretty much swept off their feet by one another. They end up spending most of their free time together from that first encounter on. We have an evening of laundry, that isn’t just laundry when Edward steals some of Bella’s undergarments, or does he? Hehehe, this chapter had me in stitches and the UST with these two is palpable from the beginning. It’s chapter nine and only about a week of time has passed by, but Bella and Edward fill it with much action. There is a scene at a Target, that I swear will have you rolling on the floor. The art of flirting that these two have is relentless, in public and in private. But, even with all of this humor the feelings they have for each other are undeniable, and something neither of them expected. Secretly they are both already wondering what they will do when Bella’s six months is over. I have to tell the truth, so am I.

Now the question that is on everyone’s minds, are there lemons? Aciepey has cockblocked us a few times already, and she and I refer to the Cullen family as the Cullen Cockblockers because of this. Here are a few examples:

As I leaned back down to capture her mouth again, she arched her center toward me, the friction on my cock delightful and torturous at the same time. I shifted my weight to my left arm and trailed my free hand to her denim-clad pussy. I could feel the heat and the dampness of her body. As I placed my hand on the button of her shorts, I looked at her face. Bella arched an eyebrow at me and winked. My heartbeat roared in my ears as I rinned and undid the four buttons of her fly. I felt the waistband of her lace panties and noticed my impossibly hard cock stiffen even more. I looked once more at Bella’s face as I slid my fingers under the fabric. Her mouth was open and she had one of her nipples between her thumb and forefinger, pulling and pinching. It was one of the hottest things I had ever seen. And then the fucking doorbell rang…

Bella padded off to the door, laughing. Five seconds later, I heard the distinct sound of my twin sister’s voice. Damn! Cockblocked by a pixie!! I would never live this down. I situated a pillow strategically over my groin and proceeded to make like I was on the Rainbow Road.

Edward raised himself onto his elbows. I knew this was so that he could have the perfect view of the pleasure he was about to receive, and this knowledge sent a chill pulsing through my entire body. I stretched up with my left hand and gently scratched his chest as I bent my head toward his erection. I let the instinct that ruled my body whenever I was around him take over as I opened my mouth to taste the pre-cum that waited for me. I had friends who had argued about the taste of a man. Those who did not like it certainly had not tasted the magnificence that was Edward. As I wrapped my lips around his head and let my tongue dance around it, I heard Edward moan. His sounds encouraged me to take him further into my mouth, squeezing him gently near his base as I looked up at him. Edward’s eyes were dark, hooded, making me wet all over again. I brought my mouth back up to the tip, concentrating my efforts on the sensitive skin there. Edward shifted to sit up, gently grasping the back of my head.

“Shit, Bella, that feels so fucking good,” Edward said in a low voice. “Your mouth, so beautiful,” he rasped.

I was certainly enjoying my new experience. Hearing his sexy words fall from his lips caused me to moan, which in turn made him tighten his hold on my head, threading his fingers through my hair. It was a fantastic sort of discomfort that served to heighten my arousal. The cycle of sensations we were having seemed to drive us both wild.

And then the fucking doorbell rang.

We both froze, not aware if we had been a bit vocal in our explorations. Like a bad, X-rated sitcom, his cock popped from my mouth as we looked at each other.

“Who the fuck would be here at…” I said, looking at my clock, “…7:30 on a Saturday?!”

I stood up and marched over to the window, near nudity be damned. I was pissed
, even more so when I heard the heavy footsteps of my landlord on the porch and saw his red Jeep with the utility trailer being pulled behind it.

“Edward, I swear, there must be a knight in shining armor holding a pair of blue balls on the Cullen family crest to symbolize the cock-blocking that is your family’s specialty.”

Edward laughed, trying to stifle it. Neither of us was ready to face Emmett if he were to go all Ricky Ricardo on us, saying that we had some ‘splainin’ to do.

Gah, see I told you. I want to make a sign myself and put it on the door. “Do not Fucking disturb, we are Fucking.” Did you hear that Aciepey? I’m making the sign as you read this.

I absolutely love Aciepey’s style of writing. She brings wit and humor to very strong, mature characters. She has me laughing all the time with the characters, and then she has me squeeeeeeing and tingling soon after. Is there anything better than laughing followed by sexual playtime? I’d say not. She makes the Forks ER seem like an episode of Grey’s Anatomy. The relationships she’s built in only a few days transcend and complement the canon relationships we all love already. This is a Cullen family that loves each other, has lots of fun together, and well, I dare say, I would love to be a part of. So, it’s no wonder that this has Bella questioning her plans for the future so soon. Hot Dr. Edward, would make anyone question their sanity if they chose to leave. So, everyone do yourself a favor and check out Detours by Aciepey, RTFN! You will NOT be disappointed.

SnowWhiteHeart says: Ok, so you’ve had a rough day. When you get home do you:

A) Watch tonight’s episode of Lost?

B) Cry your eyes out watching some drama?

C) Pop your Sex and the City DVD in and put on your favorite episode?

If you chose C, then you should read Detours.

Why? It’s fun, lighthearted and sexy.

If you need a break from plotlines that give you migraines with their complexity, or that make you cry so much you need a prescription for Restasis, please read this great fic.

First off, this is a NEW Bella.

She’s adventurous. She’s– dare I say it– CHEERFUL! Let’s just say this Bella wouldn’t be played by KStew. This Bella uses exclamation marks when she talks. Her positive and outgoing attitude is downright infectious. Which is funny, because she works at a hospital.

Oh, and Edward? Yeah, here’s how Bella meets Edward. God, I’d love to meet the big EC this way…

I made my way down the hall to the call room. It was very typical. Two sets of bunk beds, an alarm clock, a closet, a bathroom. I turned to lock the door and then put the fresh clothes on one of the beds. I reached for the hem of my soiled shirt and had taken it off when the bathroom door opened. My jaw hit the floor as I blushed and gawked at the god-like being that was standing in the doorway, still wet from his shower and one of those standard issue hospital towels slung low on his perfect hips.

“Uh…ummm…” I stammered. “I thought that nobody was in here. Puking accident. Very messy. Not me. Four-year-old. Cheerios. Very gross.” Oh, shut up already, Bella. I felt the blush spread over my face as I looked into the most beautiful green eyes ever. He also had towel dried and tousled locks of dark hair and a wicked, crooked smile that totally owned me already.

“I thought I locked the door. This is a little awkward,” he laughed in a velvet voice that was just heavenly. He walked in front of me to the closet and grabbed his fresh clothes, then retreated to the bathroom again, but not before letting his eyes roam over my torso and then looking at my eyes. “Give me a minute and I’ll be out of your way.”

I flopped onto one of the bunks and tried to comprehend what just had happened. Then it dawned on me: I was sitting there in my bra and scrub bottoms! I was beyond mortified, and if I hadn’t been covered in vomit, I would have run from the room. But, I caught him looking at me. That hot man was checking me out! Thank goodness I had the presence of mind to put a pretty bra on.

Is it getting hot in here? This story isn’t just cute and lighthearted, it’s fuckhot.

I swear, E and B haven’t even hit it yet, and I’ve already nearly passed out from spontaneous combustion five times before chapter 9. Even their first kiss, a make-out session in a supply closet, was enough to elicit an “nnnngh” from my lips.

As I stood there, holding him prisoner with my body against the door, Edward bent his head down toward my face, green eyes smoldering, and without a word, pressed his lips to mine. They were soft and hesitant at first, but then he wrapped an arm around my waist while bringing his other hand to my face, his thumb on my cheek as his fingers caressed the area behind my ear. His hand continued slowly down my neck and collarbone, leaving a goose bump trail behind it. The feeling was incredible, and I couldn’t help the quiet moan that escaped my throat. I threw caution to the wind and opened my mouth to lick his bottom lip. I just had to taste him. In no time, his tongue was tentatively mingling with mine, a gentle give and take as we explored each other’s mouth. He moved his focus from my mouth to my jaw, kissing and licking to my earlobe. I felt his breath; both hot on my ear and cool over the areas he had just been sucking. The feeling was such a turn-on that I grabbed his ass and forced his leg between my own, creating some delicious friction on my core. I felt him groan into my neck as he began to rub his thigh slowly between my legs.

Amirite? Hot! So, if you’re dig hot doctors, fics that don’t make you cry, and really cute interactions with the entire Cullen crew, read Detours.

Kassiah says: I agree with these ladies and really love this story. It’s fun and it’s hot. Check it out