Secret Sex by erinbatt

Official Description: Edward and Bella have a dirty little secret…or so they think. Thanks to @TheWeeklyWank for the, ahem…inspiration. AH / Canon pairings.

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The only thing you need to know about this story is that it’s filled with lemony goodness. *looking around* No, I’m not kidding. Seriously, the lemons are good, and according to the statistic, there is a lemon or more in every chapter. No, I did not just make that up. Well, I didn’t do the math, but there is a lemon in each chapter. Why do I keep repeating the word ‘lemon’? Well, because there are f *cough* loads of that in this one!

I love how erinbatt painted us this picture of Edward and Bella, secretly loving each other, without realizing it themselves. Sometimes, we don’t know why we want to do a certain thing, but we still do them by impulse, and that’s what happened to Edward, and thank God that he did, because he changed his and Bella’s relationship forever.

We often have a third party involvement in the angst of a story; however, the author of Secret Sex did something different, and you’re right, there is no third party involvement. No cheating, no misunderstanding, nope, not in the past chapters. I wouldn’t say that there is no angst in this story, because there are certain scenes or situations where the main characters’ hearts are practically shattered into millions of pieces; one word, separation.

Secret Sex by erinbatt is a beautiful, light-hearted story about two young souls who are learning about each other while living their lives. It reminds me how carefree love can make you feel, and how love can change you.

Definitely a drool-worthy FF!

Let me just start by saying, any fic that starts like this is a definite winner for me…

Fuck. I was in serious trouble and I knew it. Bella looked like sex as she walked off the fucking plane and across the terminal to where I stood waiting. Normally this wouldn’t be much of a problem at all. I’d take her in a bathroom, in my car, in the fucking lobby if they’d let me…

So it’s obvious that this story is hot, after reading the title I expected that. What I didn’t expect was to love the story as much as I did.

Bella and Edward’s relationships goes through so much, but every twist and turn has you wanting more…

Could I kiss her? Would she want me to or would she get pissed off? Would it be too presumptuous to assume I had any right? Yet again, I cursed my inability to read minds as the moment slipped away and my hand fell awkwardly back to my own beer bottle. She looked away quickly and changed the topic to make a funny comment about how Jessica had gained weight and that it kind of served her right for always being such a jerk.

The moment was long gone.

It didn’t come back.

Summer carried on.

Even with the heartache, the sweetness that’s mixed makes it worth it.

Answering her pleas with actions, I pressed my lips against hers affectionately, wanting to kiss her slowly and properly, despite the location and the risk. My tears finally pushed past the brim of my eyelids and spilled onto her cheeks below. She whimpered and blinked and her own stream dripped down her temples and into my hands where they held her precious, little head in my capable palms. I kissed her gently and whispered a hundred promises in her ear as I slowly freed us from the articles of clothing standing in our way. I was going to make love to Bella the right way, atone for every error we each made that derailed our friendship.

Honestly, I can’t wait to see where this one goes. I need more. NOW. Read it, you’ll want more too.

I’ll start out with a little honest: I’ve had a crazy week, and I’ve only able to read the first couple chapters of this story so far. That being said, erinbatt sure knows how to create a hook that will keep her audience reading!

From the very beginning, we see the intense connection Edward feels to Bella, and before it even happens, you’ll want some crazy, hot, forbidden fucking RTFN! As he describes the on-going relationship they’ve had for years, there are hints at something more between them that he’s not quite saying. They’ve been best friends forever and sleeping together for so long, yet…that’s all they are? No way. I don’t buy it.

Apparently, the family doesn’t either.

Yeah, that’s right baby, how’s that wet little burn in between your legs feeling now? Because mine is much better, thank you for asking. I smirked at her. Then I looked up. Four other pairs of incredulous eyes were glaring at me, some with humour, some with admonishment, and some with a combination of the two.

“What?” I sneered at them all.

Emmett snorted. “Bro, we aren’t as dumb as we look.” He laughed and went about throwing cd’s roughly into a box.

In confusion, I looked to Bella. She blushed crimson, bit her beautiful, fucking little lip, and turned away to continue packing books. Everyone but me giggled a little stiffly.

So much for secret sex. What the fuck had gone on out here while I was in there wanking off?

Well, well, well, things are going to get very interesting, aren’t they? Hell, that’s enough to keep me reading. I like this because it’s smut fic with an interesting plot, and the author has so much room to use the characters’ pasts together and what can come now that their charade has been exposed to create a really intriguing story. Happy reading, darlings!

Ah, Secret Sex. I don’t remember how I came across this story, but I wish I did so I could give the person who rec’d it to me a big, sloppy kiss. Or something.

Like gossip-bangkok said, Secret Sex is a story filled with lemony goodness. One of the things that is so great about this fic is that this is not Porn Without Plot. Yes, the lemons are fucking hot. Yes, there’s citrus in every chapter. But more than that, erinbatt gives us the progression of the growing relationship between Edward and Bella perfectly.

The story started off being a one-shot written for the ahem Weekly Wank blog. There are some grammatical errors and stuff like that, but the storyline more than makes up for it IMO. Set in the present, Edward has just completed grad school and his entire family, along with Bella, arrives to help him pack. We learn that he and Bella have been fucking around, secretly, for ten years, and that being in such close proximity to her again makes him lose all reason as he pulls her into the bathroom and …

I spun around, grabbing her ass like I had wanted to do since I first saw her strut her shit down the airport terminal in those tight fucking pants, if you could even call them that. I squeezed the beautiful handful of flesh, and then rather unceremoniously, whipped her around, her back to me. Knowing we had minutes, if that, before someone wondered what we were doing, I bent her over the vanity in the bathroom and yanked down those goddamn leggings. Jamming my knee in between hers, I shoved her legs apart wide, causing her to gasp loudly. It was so fucking sexy.

I met her eyes in the reflection of the glass, widening mine in a silent reprimand despite enjoying the sound. She needed to shut the fuck up unless she thought outing us this way was a good fucking idea…which I kind of did not.

They’re interrupted, and Bella leaves the room before either of them can finish. When he comes out, she’s blushing and Emmett lets Edward know that they aren’t as stupid as [they] all look. Though Edward is frustrated and didn’t want his family to find out this way, his priority is Bella.

“We’re not kids anymore, Edward, they hardly care.” Bella rolled her eyes dramatically. She stared at the floor, suddenly very interested in a scuff that she was rubbing at with the toe of her shoe. Her face flamed a delicious shade of red and I knew she was faking it, she cared. My mood shifted instantly from annoyance to a need to comfort her. That was what I did; I protected Bella, from almost everything. I was somehow unable to protect her from myself.

I jumped up and went to her, laying my palms against her burning cheeks. I tilted her face upward to meet my eyes. She tried to look away, but I dropped my head to meet her gaze. With my thumb rubbing comforting little circles on her cheeks, I dipped down and placed a small, tender kiss just beside it on her cheek. It was an almost innocent little peck, which perhaps lingered a bit long, as my family pretended not to be watching the display from their place behind Bella in the living room.
I scoffed and stared deep into her eyes as she tried to squirm from my grip. “You’re right,” I began, “we aren’t kids anymore. And it isn’t as if they know when or how this whole thing began.”

And thus the story really begins. Edward recalls the moment that started it all for them. They’d always been best friends, since birth, and had always been close. One night, as Juniors in high school, their relationship shifts and becomes something more. Because of the freedom both of their parents allow them to have with each other as BFFs, they don’t tell about the new development–they don’t want to be kept apart. They don’t put labels on what they share, and when they go off to different colleges, thousands of miles away from each other, the separation really starts to take its toll. Somehow they stop communicating and things feel forced when they see each other over the summer. They lose touch, and are both absolutely miserable. Then, at Christmas, they start to figure their shit out.

Operating impetuously, I bent down to kiss her. I just had to. I had resisted too many times in the past. Somehow knowing it would either make or break us.

My lips met hers softly and cautiously. I had no idea how she was going to receive my unbidden actions. But her delicious taste swam through me welcomingly and I felt warm and peaceful, despite being barefoot in twenty degree weather and in the midst of the most heated argument of my life. There was no more fight left in me. I loved her. End of story.

I love how this Edward is so hopelessly devoted to Bella. I love how he matures, progressomg from a protective friend and horny teenager in high-school to realizing that their separation, though it’s killing him, is temporary. This story is all EPOV, but erinbatt conveys Bella’s insecurities so well. She’s just a girl who loves a boy and doesn’t really get how intensely he loves her back. She has strengths, and Edward loves her for them, but she’s made better by him and the way he has always protected and taken care of her.

Did I mention that this story is fucking hot?

Bella pulled viciously at my hair and rode the shit out of me as I grunted beneath her. She licked and kissed her way along my jaw and up the side of my neck toward my ear. She sucked on my earlobe and then ran her tongue along the shell of my ear. When she got to the top of it she bit hard into the cartilage and ground into mine. She didn’t rise again despite the automatic pull I gave on her hips, used to the steady rhythm of up and down. Instead she stayed firmly planted against me and swivelled and squirmed, driving me deep inside her. A wave of intense sensation crashed down on me and levelled me with its force as the head of my dick hit something inside of her. She whimpered and shuddered.

“Do you feel that, Edward?” she breathed into my ear.

Jesus mother fucking Christ, of course I feel it.

I grunted.

“That…,” Bella panted into me. “That is exactly where you belong.”

I didn’t even know what to say to that. The sensation was still ebbing and flowing inside me, lighting my toes and fingertips on fire. My thighs quaked and the tip of my left ear throbbed.

My hands abandoned her hips and ran up her back to her head. I cupped her face and held her firmly between my palms, her hair sticky and clinging to her cheeks and neck. I looked into her eyes and she looked back into mine. Our eyebrows knit and our eyes twitched as we stared at one another and the sensations continued to pull at us.

She slowly raised her hips off of me and sank back down at a slower, more controlled rhythm. Something warm and thick spread through me like melted honey and my eyes closed slowly of their own volition. The next thing I knew Bella’s velvet lips were brushing against mine. It was a slow and tender kiss. It was a kiss that spoke of both lust and adoration. It was familiar and reverent. I knew that feeling of her lips on mine, the sensation of making love to her, the taste and scent of her body, and the way she shivered in my arms when overwhelmed by sensation.

Though I wouldn’t necessarily categorize Secret Sex as a fluff fic, I would say it’s very wussperv-friendly. If you are looking for something with smoking hot lemons, an amazing plot that isn’t going to rip your heart out, and characters that you can believe in and love, this fic is the story for you.