http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4951259/1/Show_and_Dont_Tell
http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=3995
Word Count: 140,896
Official Description: Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K Class, and sparks fly. Are there some complications that even the strongest of hearts can’t overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can’t have–each other?
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secamimom says: So, I was lurking on twitter the other day and I saw @Kassiah tweet about a little story she was reading. It was called Show and Don’t Tell. I immediately recognized the title because it had been on my TBR list for a while now. I had already started the author’s other story and loved it and I completely trust Kassiah’s opinion so I jumped right in. And I have never been so happy to do so.
From their first awkward meeting, Edward walking into the doorjamb and all, to the ass grabbing ’cause that’s what friends do, this story pwned me and pwned me hard. I am not one to usually pay attention to songs the author asks you to listen to for a chapter. I have only done a couple of other times. I was so glad that I chose to do so this time. Chapter 11…..that’s all you need to know. Listen to the song for chapter 11. I did that and it has been playing pretty much non stop on my iPod since finishing that chapter. Just read this little snippet…..
“Kiss me through the phone, I’ll see you later on….”
I started laughing obnoxiously and he turned around fast.
“Soulja Boy? Really?” I asked, amused. He danced towards me.
“Baby I know that you like me, you my future wifey, Soulja Boy I tell em yea you can be my Bonnie, I can be your Clyde, you can be my wife….”
I couldn’t stop laughing at him; he was just ridiculous and cute all rolled into one.
“And every time I see ya my feelings get deeper, I miss ya, I miss ya, I really wanna kiss you but I can’t……”
He rolled his eyes at himself as he popped one of his ear buds out. “You love me even though I’m a dork huh?”
“No, I love you because you’re a dork. And how do you know I love you?” I asked playfully.
“Oh I know,” he said, bobbing his head.
I went and sat on the bed and started brushing through my tangled hair. I looked up at Edward a few moments later and he was walking towards me slowly, with his sexy ass smirk he likes to throw at me.
“She call my phone like da da dadadadada da…..”
I laid back on the bed as he crawled towards me on all fours.
“We on the phone like da da dadadadada da…”
He hovered over me as he ran his nose up and down my jaw line, over my collarbone. I started panting like I had just run a marathon.
Could you imagine Edward crawling towards you singing this song? And yeah….guess what? It’s even better from EPOV. That’s right. There is an EPOV of this story too. So do yourself a favor. Go read this awesome story. You won’t be sorry. I can’t believe I put it off as long as I did.
Kassiah says: I don’t know what made me click on this story; I’ve had it on alert forever. I seriously could kick my own ass for waiting so long to read it though. It’s now one of my favorite stories, and the quote that secamimom provided for you above is one of my favorite scenes in all of fanfiction.
Show and Don’t Tell is not a typical cliche story. Edward and Bella aren’t technically together throughout much of the story, but they are still “together”. I love the dialogue and the intense relationship that they have. The story is funny and romantic, with a touch of crazy and a dash of adorable. I broke my ten chapter rule for this one, and it was soooo worth it.
Words cannnot express how strongly I feel about this fic. Just read it 
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