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Got ‘Best Angst’ mention in ‘Slash Backslash’ contest! ‘The way he looks at me makes me feel…uncomfortable.’ Jasper’s girlfriend’s brother, Edward, keeps staring at him. Why? Who knows. Seems like even Edward is confused…SLASH, AH, very OOC.
Don’t Miss Twenty Questions, a complementary one-shot to Uncomfortable!
If you know me, it should come as no surprise that I stand hard for Savannah-Vee. She’s pretty damn awesome. So when I was asked to write up a quick little rec for Uncomfortable, I jumped on that shit faster than I would jump on Jasper’s peen.
Well, that’s a lie. I’d probably jump on Jasper’s peen faster… but still… it was really fast. *nods*
Uncomfortable never fails to leave me conflicted. One chapter, I hate the fuck out of Edward and in the next, I’m kind of feeling sorry for him and wanting to hump his face a little. I’m on a constant roller coaster and it’s sooo addicting.
We start off with Jasper at his girlfriend’s parents home. Nothing too special, right? Well, not really. Alice’s brother is also there and he just won’t stop staring at Jasper. He’s staring so much, in fact, that it’s making Jas incredibly uncomfortable.
But then, he stops. Just stops. Doesn’t even acknowledge Jasper’s presence and you’re left thinking “What the fuck?”
Oh, but the mind-fuckery is just beginning, folks.
A few weeks pass and everyone is at Rose’s birthday party. Edward is there with his girl, Bella, and they’re making out hardcore. Like, the shit made me shift in my seat a little.
Seeing the pair damn near fucking makes Jasper uncomfortable, but he can’t stop looking at Edward’s tongue, his hips as he grinds into Bella, his hands groping her ass…
Jasper is surprised when Edward opens his eyes and looks at him while he’s mouth fucking his girlfriend. But he doesn’t miss the fact that Edward’s groans are now louder, his hips are now moving with more urgency, his hands are gripping harder.
Oh yeah. *licks lips* Edward totally wants to do Jasper. And I want a front row seat.
After a few hot-as-fuck, but just as confusing altercations, we get what we’ve all been waiting for… kind of… when Jasper, who’s at Alice’s house, gets up in the middle of the night, hoping to run into Edward. Jas definitely gets what he was hoping for.
[dcs_p]“… the truth is; I fucking want you too.” He removes a hand from the door and cups my face, stroking it with his thumb. “There’s something about you, Whitlock, something so fucking appealing.” He brushes his thumb over my lips. “Maybe it’s the way your lips are so fucking pouty, and red,” he murmurs, tracing around my mouth with his thumb. He grinds his hips into me vigorously.”Maybe it’s the size of your delicious looking cock.” His fingers ghost over my cheeks, over my jaw, over my eyebrows, and my eyes flutter close.”Maybe it’s your innocent looking, pretty-boy face.” He brushes back a tendril from my forehead, and then keeps his hand in my hair, gripping a tuft of it tightly. He shifts into me again. “Look at me.” I open my eyes, and his face is so close to mine that our lips brush as he breathes. “Or maybe it’s your eyes…”[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]At that, he presses his mouth against me, his soft, full lips moving languorously over mine. He catches my bottom lip between his own, and sucks at it languidly, tugging at it slightly with his teeth.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]For a moment, I’m inebriated.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]No girl I had kissed had ever made me feel the way he makes me feel, as his lips work leisurely, yet forcefully with mine. It’s glorious.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]I open my eyes briefly, in order to watch his face as he kisses me, to ingrain the memory deep in my brain. I want to never forget this moment.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]And I’m startled to find a sharp green eye staring right back at me, glinting under the partial hood of his eyelid.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]I groan.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]He continues on, kissing me at the same slow pace, his fist still clenching my hair, nothing like the frantic way I’d seen him kiss his girlfriend Bella, yet somehow, it’s ten times more fervent. There’s almost a feeling of need behind the kiss, concentrated desire pouring out into each lingering movement of his mouth.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]It’s mind-blowing.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]I want more.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]I push my hips into his, grabbing his thighs and pulling him to me in the process. He immediately quickens his movements on my mouth, thrusting into me relentlessly as he does. His tongue comes out and brushes against my lips, once, twice, three times. Then with a sudden impatience he is prodding my lips open with it, and when they part for him, he’s shoving it down my throat.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]“Mmmmm…” I groan into his mouth.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]He drives his dick into meeven harder at the sound, violently, my ass slamming into the door noisily, over… and over…and over… and over.[/dcs_p]
[dcs_p]He grunts and releases my mouth, breathing heavily into my face.”Suck my cock,” he growls.[/dcs_p]
Ohhhh yeah.
So the following scene is verrah, verrah hot, but how it ends will leave you looking like this: O.O
And all of this is in the very first chapter.
Edward, or as I like to call him, Mindfuckward, never fails to make me want to kick him in the balls. But he’s so sexy with his pierced nipple and tattoos, that I’ll probably just end up sucking him off or something. But I’d definitely kick him in the nuts first to show him who’s boss. *nods*
Throughout the story, Mindfuckward stays mysterious, aloof and more than a little asshole-y. You’re always wondering what the fuck is going through his head and why in the hell he does the things he does. But there are a few peeks into the real Edward, when he shows heart-clenching vulnerability and sweetness. And it’s these rare glimpses that keep me coming back, hoping that the douchey part of him will stay away for good. And also maybe, a little bit hoping that he stays an asshole so I can hate him even more and complain about him to Savannah. *snicker*
If you haven’t read this story, you need to get on it right the fuck now. Uncomfortable was my very first slash and I couldn’t have picked a better cherry popper than this. Like everything Savannah-vee touches, it’s freakin’ awesome.
This story is too intense for my poor little wusspervy heart, but I have to tell you–I read the first chapter and ohmigod…just ohmigod. I don’t even have any other words.
If you like slash–or even if you don’t–you should check this out. It’s well-written and amazing and I really want to know what happens, even if I can’t handle it.
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