Official Description:
He couldn’t keep his eyes off them or his hands off himself. His want for them is only equal to theirs for each other. *SPANK THE MONKEY CONTEST ENTRY* Explicit adult content, unabashed PWP. Who’s in your mind’s eye?
Word Count: 2,288
Even if I hadn’t been threatened with man-eating clowns, I would be absolutely stoked to write a guest review for the “Hottest Wank” winner in the Spank The Monkey contest: Want, by mostlyalurker. Not only is she a lovely human being, she’s also a talented writer who has produced a sizzling, sexy scenario, in which it’s all too easy to imagine ourselves.
“Want” is one of those rare beasts: a smexy oneshot that heats the blood, but doesn’t leave a crassy aftertaste. Having said that, it’s still an explicit read, unapologetic in its straightforwardness.
Our protagonist, the wanker if you will, is unidentified, but not someone we can’t identify with. Have you ever wondered what it’s like to be a fly on the wall? Our wanker does, and he makes no pretense about it- he is about to become that fly.
“…I was hard now, his passion becoming mine. I felt the silky strands of her hair in my fingers as he fisted it in his…”
This is no accidental guilty glimpse of a hurried coupling that puts our wanker in the same place and time as his quarry, his actions are premeditated. He’s driven to witness, he wants to watch. He’s a seasoned voyeur.
We are at once the fly on the wall with our wanker, and the participants in the rendezvous he is watching. He affords us the view from above, as well as the view inside his own head, which takes what he is seeing and conveniently juxtaposes the parties into various positions for maximum effect.
“…I knew the time was nearly upon us and mentally changed to one final position, my personal favorite, allowing myself to enter the fantasy completely…”
He feels the lusty want exuding from the couple he watches and he imagines scenarios where he himself might be involved, and the ease with which he interpolates himself into the tryst is a sure sign that he has done this many times before.
As I wrote in my review on FFn, I both loved and hated not knowing the names of the characters- when I started reading I put faces on the them, but having no confirmation of who they are is actually quite liberating. There was nothing spare here, nothing extraneous. Everything was true to purpose, which was for our wanker to get off watching the mystery couple get each other off, nothing more or less than that.
The episode begins like a simple drum and sexy bass beat, and quickly escalates into a delicious hard rocking rhythm. Mostlyalurker has served up a delicious treat, and you’ll want more. Trust.
I was lucky enough to be a judge on Spank The Monkey Contest, and that’s how I found this fuckawesome story. Alby Mangroves did an awesome job telling you about it, and I just wanted to add that I love it, too. I wish I knew who the couple was–and I definitely have some characters that I picture. Definitely check it out!
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