http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5196641/1/Whatever_the_Lady_Wants
Word Count: 36,517

Official Description: Edward and Bella have been dating for three months, but they are experiencing issues. Bella thinks that her ex-boyfriend might be able to help. Will her decision make or break their relationship? AH AU
Check out the prequel, Bless Me.
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TwilightJems says: Different things can draw you into a story, the summary, a blog recommendation or word of mouth. “Whatever the Lady Wants” was introduced to me by the nightly Twitter readalong, and I am truly grateful. The summary really made my mind very curious to see how this story would play out. Just by reading the very first chapter, I knew it was going to be an amazing ride – pun intended – and by the end, I was definitely not disappointed. I think the only thing about this story that makes me sad, is the fact is has so few reviews.
The author, einfach mich, doesn’t gloss over anything, even though the timeline of the story is one night. We are filled in on all the pertinent background information to get a full, up-close look into her characters. Their struggles, their love, their fears are so beautifully written, I can see them play out before my eyes. We see Bella struggle with a decision that could potentially kill her relationship with Edward. We watch Edward’s love encourage him to overcome his fear and expand his sexuality to accept Bella’s ex-lover as his tutor.
As the author takes us through the beginning chapters, she smoothly integrates the past into the present. Letting us see how our the characters got themselves into this predicament. As she moves into the second half of the story, einfach mich shows us that she is also a master at writing citrus. Just as she let me see the beginning of the story, the end made me feel like I was watching porn. My only advice, make sure you’re alone when reading. Hm, then again, maybe not. Just thinking about it is making me giggle-blush!
Ultimately, this is a jam-packed story that will not leave you wanting, in any way. Einfach mich gives us memorable romance, lesbians, love, fighting, car orgasms, drag queens, sex, tears, alcohol, and the most unique threesome scene ever. I’m forgetting something… Right, the brown paper party pack, but I can’t tell you about that, you’ll just have to read. Yes, I really am smirking right now.


















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