Grand Jeté by Stella Luna Sky

Official Description: She moves through her comfortable life without much passion, without much conviction. When she meets the man who can teach her the importance of treating transient life with respect and love, she has to take the grandest leap of faith she’s ever faced.



“She’s done playing safe. Done making small, cautious steps she defined as chances because she’d never tried them before. Chances aren’t sure things, and isn’t that what life is? Embracing that nothing is a sure thing?

She doesn’t know.

But she’s going to find out.”

Don’t you just love when characters have some big, great realization that life is more than just a day to day thing? That it’s about taking chances, and seeing where the load less traveled will lead you. I do. Which is why I think y’all should read this fic.

I became a fan of Stella Luna Sky’s writing after I read one of her one-shots a while ago. While I was rereading it a few weeks back, I clicked her profile to see what else she had written. And I found Grand Jeté, and have been in love ever since.

Bella is a college student and a dancer who knows she needs to branch out, but just isn’t sure how to. Enter Edward, the mysterious guy who she’s been noticing over the last few months in one of her classes. A chance smoke break leads to them talking, and the story sets off from there. There’s more to Edward than just the surface though, as Bella finds out along the way.

I really like stories where the characters speak and have such a clear voice that you can’t help but separate them from other stories. And that is so this story. The banter between Bella and Edward is great. It’s funny and quick, and leaves you laughing (or sighing, or swooning, or choked up…). I really like this Bella—she doesn’t take shit from Edward, and she gives him hell right back when he goes on pity party tangents. The premise is one that tugs at your heart strings, the writing is lovely, and the secondary characters are used in really great ways that add to the story rather than detract. I can’t say enough good things about this fic. I hope you guys will read it and leave the author some love; it’s one you shouldn’t miss!

Grand Jeté is a fucking spectacular story. There’s just no other way to phrase it, and you should stop whatever you’re doing right now, and go read and review the story.

I don’t even want to spoil a single thing about this story, because the way stella luna sky writes is so beautiful and not overdone, that I want you to experience it firsthand. There are no unnecessary words or descriptions here, as this story is currently 13 chapters and just over 52K words. SLS predicts the story will run only 20 chapters, something almost unheard of anymore in fic, but at the way it’s pacing, it will come in right at novel-length.

The chapters are easy to read and a nice size, making this story a pleasure to sit down and dive into. There is some angst, but not without cause. This is one of the most real stories I’ve read, with real characters that you can identify with and fall in love with.

The lemons are there, but not overdone, and not lengthy. They suit the tone and feel of this story so perfectly, though. Each one is a drop of refreshment and connection between the characters, and doesn’t feel added in to spice up the story or attract readers.

Bella isn’t your somewhat typical weak female lead, and in fact, chapter 11 shows you all you need to know about her. She’s brave, and fierce, and she’s ready to fucking fight for what she wants (and needs) in her life, even when Edward is being … Edward.

This Edward also isn’t your stereotypical feelings-gushing dude. He has feelings, he just isn’t the most effusive person, and he’s insecure. He has issues, and he knows it. He fears, and more than once, I was on the brink of tears while reading, so easily it was to identify with the feeling of new love and all of the insecurity wrapped up in it. Love doesn’t generally come easily or fast, and making it work, it’s not a snap of the fingers. It’s work, and these two work at it. This line in chapter 10 is a great illustration of that:

“I wouldn’t say it’s easy,” she counters, holding her hand out to him. “I would just say it’s worth it.”

This story is so beautiful and real, and the characters are so well written and touching. I’m so glad I dove in, and I can’t wait to go back and re-read each chapter as I leave some review love.

It’s easy in life to forget about what’s important. We all get caught up in the minutiae and take things and people for granted. Grand Jeté is a heartwarming story about living life to the fullest, even when facing death.

Bella feels drawn to Edward in ways she doesn’t understand. He’s sexy and mysterious, and unnervingly straight forward. She wants to understand him, to really know him, but he won’t let her in, despite wanting her more than he’s ever wanted anyone before. He thinks he’s protecting her because he doesn’t feel free to love. Cancer has made him feel like loving him is an unfair thing to ask of someone.

“I didn’t think anyone would ever want to love me,” he whispers against her cheek. “The disease – it’s not pretty. A relapse could happen any day. Any time. Right now, there could be cancer cells reforming. Love isn’t easy to begin with, but when you put this into the equation, it can be impossible.”
She shakes her head and kisses him again. She feels so fragile, like the air around them is going to shatter if she breathes too loudly. He groans quietly against her lips.
“This is going to sound cheesy… but it was never an option for me,” she says quietly. “I knew, going into this, that I would love you. That you would change my life. That you would teach me.”
“What could I teach you, Bella? You have everything at your fingertips. You’re beautiful, healthy, really fucking intelligent. You’re so… talented, with dancing and cooking and photography… and with people. You’re gentle. You can handle anyone. Me, Emily, your mom – we’re all different people, totally different. But you care for each of us, and never try to change us. You just – you just care. What can I teach you?”
She kisses him again because she can, because she’s so overwhelmed with this moment. “You teach me why all of that is important.”

Despite his fears, he eventually lets Bella in, and their relationship becomes intense and passionate. They laugh and love and even fight like any normal couple. She makes Edward feel alive for the first time in a long time, and he finally feels like he has a reason to fight. They’re adorable together, and their sexy times leave you wanting more.

“Space invader,” she grumbles, kicking off her flip-flops and sitting gracefully on bed. Far, far away from his body.
“No, no,” he chides, and grabs at her foot. He yanks her in his direction, and she screeches. “Come here.” He pats his chest.
He’s so weird. So strange – doesn’t he have any sense of chronological order? Date first, kiss second, make love third, cuddle in bed fourth.
“I have to know,” he says as she crawls over that way, “if we fit together this way. If we don’t… then what’s the point?”
“Right,” she murmurs, because she doesn’t really understand, but she wants so much to be close to him. She lays her head to his chest, and it’s like his heartbeat is right there, with no flesh covering its sound.

Even though they are happy, there is always more lurking under the surface. He’s had to endure chemo and all the struggles that go along with it. But the last thing he wants is pity, and that makes him independent, almost to a fault. Neither of them wants to face the possibility that his disease could creep back into their lives at any time, even though it never really left. It is a part of him, always.

He shrugs after a moment. “One night, Alice and I talked about what being cured really means, and how many people never see that day. Do you want to know the statistics?”
She blanches. “No, I really don’t.”
“You need to know them. They aren’t awful, but there’s still about half a chance I’ll die from the disease within the next five years.”
“Edward, for god’s sake,” she snaps. “I said I didn’t want to know.”
“I don’t know if I can really wrap my mind around it,” he continues. “Not reaching my thirtieth birthday. Not watching my hair turn grey, or my eyes turn wrinkled in the corners. All these signs of aging that people take for granted, I want. Is that weird? I remember talking to this old man once, in the hospital. He had leukemia too, but a kind that really only occurs in senior citizens. He said to me, ‘I don’t understand plastic surgery. I wear these wrinkles like a badge of honor.”

I had the hardest time picking quotes for this review, because there are too many great ones to narrow down. This story takes a very realistic look at moving past a horrible disease to live an enriched life. Don’t let this difficult topic deter you from reading this wonderful story. It’s not watered down, nor is it overly sappy and depressing. It’s just an honest look at love and life, told by someone who has a renewed lease on life.
I promise you’ll love this one.

What else can I say? I love this story, and I love this author. Read it, or you’re missing out on something amazing and beautiful.

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Major Misconduct by m7707

Official Description: Edward Cullen – hot high school hockey player. Bella Swan – shy high school student. They’ve admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Will they be strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished…


Recently, there have been a few “Hockeywards” gracing our monitors. That’s one thing I love about this fandom—we get a few stories that hit around the same time with a similar thread, but such different takes on the subject that they are still viable.

Major Misconduct would be the High School side of Edward in skates, and it’s adorable.

When Alice tells her BFF Bella that she has been dating a new fella, Bella is shocked to learn the guy is Jasper—the buddy of the guy (Edward, of course) that she has been crushing on since she was a freshman, but who has ran in separate circles from her until the first day of Bella’s junior year in high school. They have a class together, and end up talking. With Alice and Jasper a couple, they have more time to get to know each other and for the crush to grow a little stronger. Edward is sweet, popular and a star of the school’s hockey team. What’s a girl to do when her crush plays a sport she knows nothing about? Hit the internet for books, movies and all things hockey, of course.

As the relationship between the two builds, so does the UST. In wonderful ways. Want to know more? I’m not telling; you have to read to find out. Dew eet, you know you wanna. :)

M7707’s writing is crisp, clean and uncluttered. It gets to the point, keeping the story rolling with chapters that read easily and keep you engrossed with funny lines, great dialogue and relatable characters. The story is told through BPOV, which is nice. You get to wonder along with her about Edward’s motivations and actions, building the story in a fun way. There is comedy—Bella’s thought processes are hilarious, and the conversations between the girls are a riot. There is also a sweet romance that feels natural and well-paced.

High school stories are, for me, hit and miss. Sometimes the kids seem too old and don’t always ring true. When I was in high school, my worries were far simpler: were my clothes in style, was my hair cool, what was everyone doing on Friday night, and did the boy of my dreams like me? One of the things I most like about m7707’s story is that her Bella worries about these things in a believable way. We’ve all made fools of ourselves talking to a cute boy, and Bella is no exception to this rule.

“What’s that?” I whispered, nodding toward the marks, unable to contain my curiosity. He glanced up at me sharply, and I blushed – yet again – in embarrassment. “I’m sorry, that’s really rude. I wasn’t snooping, I was just…”

“Relax, Bella,” he murmured back. “They’re not gang signs or anything.”

I was drowning in embarrassment. “Really, sorry…”

Those green eyes seemed to search my face. “You do that too much.”

Was I drowning before? Now I was positively wallowing. “I know,” I admitted miserably. “It’s the bane of my existence. I’ve always been an easy blusher.”

His mouth curved up on one side. I made a frantic note to never be funny in front of him, ever, as my focus zeroed in on that mouth and heat curled through my insides. Everything else faded.

“No,” he said, “not your blushing, although that’s pretty cute. You apologize too much.”

“Sorry.” It came out automatically. Wait…what? Did he just say I was cute? Am I thrilled or offended?

I cringe for her!

If you are looking for an awesome read, something to keep you entertained as the summer months roll in and the days are lazy and warm, you should read this story. I’m in love with it already, and I want you to be, too. Go read and leave her some love; you won’t be sorry!

I think it’s pretty safe to guess that everyone knows that I love highschool fics. They are my absolute favorite. There’s just something about being able to realistically believe you’re invincible.

Major Misconduct is a great story that has an amazing Edward and Bella *gasp!* in high school. One of the things that I really love about this fic is that it’s just so real> These kids have typical issues like whether or not someone likes them and if they’ll be embarrassed by their older brother showing their parents their condom stash, rather than helping their BFF go to rehab undetected or if their mom is going to fuck their intended. It’s refreshing, honestly.

My eyes immediately went to Edward, his tall form and bright, unruly hair unmistakable. He wasn’t completely dressed in his full uniform – he didn’t have his skates or all of his pads on yet. He walked out onto the ice and gave me a smirk before turning his attention to the stick he held in his hands and the puck he dropped on the ice. I watched, mesmerized, as he started playing keep-away with one of his teammates that had come out with him and was clad in a similar manner. He barely moved his body, the blade of his stick flashing in a blur as he flicked the puck around – underneath him, the other player, between their legs, around their feet. The stick and his hands were constantly in motion. They were both laughing as the speed of the blade and the puck increased, and finally the other guy pushed him and walked away, shaking his head. His teammate had never even come close to the puck.

He looked up at me again and winked, walking out a little further onto the ice before turning and facing the boards in the corner, where the plexiglass reached far above our heads. He swung and hit the puck, playing kind of a one person rebound, like hitting a tennis ball against the wall. The puck hit the boards and flew into the air, sliding up along the plexiglass and shooting up into the air, only to arc up over the ice to fall at his feet. I couldn’t see it at all; I had no idea how he could follow it. I saw him looking at me out of the corner of his eye, and he started catching the puck on the blade of his stick as it sailed through the air back toward him, flipping it and then catching it again on the other side. Oh yeah, he was showing off, all right. He grinned, cocking his brow arrogantly at me before half-jogging, half-sliding across the ice, hopping over the wall and heading back into the locker room.

This fic is very sweet and fun, and with hockeyward, you know you can’t go wrong. Check it out ;)

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Elemental by TallulahBelle

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5241793/1/Elemental


Official Description: AU/AH: When the Swans return to their birthplace, Bella learns she is no ordinary teenager, and Forks is no ordinary town. Can she fulfill her destiny with the powerful Edward Cullen, or will the dark forces that threaten their families destroy them all?

Don’t miss Elemental: Of Air and Water, Scenes in EPOV for the winners of FGB.


nicnicd says: Ever resisted a rec so completely, only to find that you want to smack yourself in the head once you do read it? That’s my story with Elemental by TallulahBelle.

I’d heard only great things about it from one of my trusted pals, but kept putting it off. Every time she asked me if I had read it yet, I came up with some excuse: “I meant to, but I got busy” or “I will as soon as I’m done with this one thing…”

Let me tell you guys—I am a jackass, and am kicking myself for not starting this sooner than I did. So, when I got asked to rec this, after professing my love about it to Kassiah, I jumped at the chance.

Sucked in before the prologue had even wrapped up, I blazed through the (at the time) sixteen posted chapters like nothing, so absorbed in this compelling story line that I literally ignored anyone and everything that I was supposed to pay attention to. My beta work fell to the wayside, my own chapter forgotten, my dinner left cold while I immersed myself in Forks in a way I have never seen in fic-land.

As the story begins, Bella is on her way back to Forks with both of her parents, who are still happily married, by the way. She’s lived a happy, normal life with them in Phoenix, and doesn’t understand why they have suddenly rushed to move back to the sleepy little town. She’s quiet and shy, in that way canon Bella was, but not so melodramatic, which I appreciate. They end up in a small cluster of homes, much nicer and decidedly…different than what the reader assumes Bella is used to.

Finally, we came to a stop in the circular driveway in front of a home that looked older than the rest. It was a large two story house; strike that, mansion, with columns that supported a second story wrap-around porch. The first story also had a porch with large French doors and dark green shutters adorning them. I could see that a good amount of the house was brick, but was painted white.

Holy shit, it’s Tara from Gone with the Wind.

Settling in, Bella comes to meet her relatives that she never knew about, as well as a few characters we all know and love—or loathe, in a few cases. A well placed (and, can I just commend TallulahBelle here for the portrayal of a SMART, yet still FUN character?) Emmett as her cousin smoothes the way, introducing Bella and helping her settle into this odd, strange world that she never knew existed.

There are a number of things I appreciate in a fic, but one of the ones I most adore is a slow build to the romance we all expect. Edward and Bella do not get along at first, and the readers are left to find out along with Bella why that is. Which leads me to another facet of this story that I applaud—there isn’t an EPOV, save for a separate outtake to a few key chapters. The mystery that surrounds his character is nice, a breath of fresh air for someone like me who likes a bit of intrigue in their reading.

Along the way, Bella learns that her parents are, in fact, witches. I know, right? My “The Craft” loving tail is squeeing in excitement, too. There is an entire coven of them who live in Forks, and something happened years before that forced Charlie and Renee to leave. I won’t give that away, because it’s central to the story line later and I’m determined to make you find out for yourself.

The relationship between Bella and Edward, when it does happen, is not something cliché or that’s been done a million times. It’s interesting and different, with little hints along the way of how right it could be… once they figure out all the rest of their troubles. One passage sticks out to me, and I’ve thought about it ever since I read it.

It was then that I noticed a strange heat coming from Edward. It felt like a languid wave of honey that started in my lower belly and moved its way through my limbs. It was subtle, but something I couldn’t ignore. I turned my head to the side and faced Edward, unsure of what I was feeling exactly.

Sigh—so pretty. And once you know WHY she feels things from him, you will appreciate that little nugget all the much more.

Seriously people, read this. This is an entirely compelling story, with a great hint of drama lurking in the wings. And one that, if you are not reading, you are missing out on. I know I was. But I have learned the error of my ways, and I’m happier for that.

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Seeing Their Future by kikikinz

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5357731/1/Seeing_Their_Future

Official Description: Alice, a successful Life Coach, has her work cut out for her with her two newest clients. Can she help ready them for the spotlight, as well as push them in the direction of each other? Will the cute lawyer she meets allow her to open up as well?AH/lemons


nicnicd says: Every once in a while, when the drama and angst and heartfail get to be too much for me, I like a nice serving of fluffy, sweet fun to read. Likable characters, an equally likable plot-line, and a bit of a geeky Edward, a yummy Jasper (whoa, did I just say that?!) and I’ve got a new happy place to hide from the heartichokes.

Seeing Their Future is just that. Told primarily through Alice and Bella POV, this is a fun, light hearted time.

Alice, a Life Coach in Chicago, gets a call about a new client, Bella Swan. Bella is a successful author who has a bit of a dilemma–her professional image and self esteem is lacking, causing her to give bad interviews and not present the best face to her public that she can. She isn’t your typical Bella though–she doesn’t fight tooth and nail about her short makeover, but rather she embraces it. She just never had anyone to show her how to ‘be a girl’.

Esme, her editor, sets out to fix not only this problem, but to help her son out as well.

Edward is a computer software developer. A literal genius, he flew through school, graduating early but not learning much about how to be sociable or presentable in the process. His company is about to go big, and his over grown beard, dirty sneakers, and stained shirts are not the way to usher in an adoring public. He’s shy and awkward, and utterly adorable.

If she said anything after that I couldn’t hear it. As we walked out the door of her office, my gaze had been caught by a pair of sharp, bottle green eyes. I froze like a deer trapped in a pair of headlights.

He wasn’t handsome by society’s standards, but there was something about him. His lips were full, the lower one sticking out like a child having a tantrum. His jaw was firm and set, covered with more than a day’s growth of hair. His posture was rigid, hands clenched in his lap. He wasn’t happy to be here. His eyes looked me up and down before they widened and dropped to the floor. His cheeks flushed with color, and caused mine to mimic him.

Aww! Blushing Edward, excuse me while I squee!

Jasper, Edward’s lawyer, is a delicious bit of scrumptious and sets his very…determined sights on Alice. Their interaction is full of UST, and damn entertaining to read. Alice is charming, and I love her POV. It’s nice to see it be such a central part of the plot, and equally great to see Edward and Bella’s relationship through some one else’s eyes.

The author is funny and sweet, and paints her picture with lots of humor and heart, so go give it a read today, and leave her some love. It’s sure to make you smile!

MF’er says: What can I say that Nic didn’t already cover? Shy, nerdy, computer geeky Edward is like my kryptonite and when you add in a fucking adorable and feisty Jasper? Pure win.

I am enjoying the premise of this story very much, it’s a lot different than anything I’ve ever read. The fact that it’s primarily in APOV is definitely new for me, I don’t read anything else where I find myself loving Alice oh so much. Her characters are wonderful.

I can’t wait to see where Edward and Bella’s relationship is headed and I definitely cannot wait for this…

“Come on Alice,” he whispered, nipping at my ear once more before spinning me around to face him. His hand cupped my face as he smiled at me tenderly. “Let me feed you and then maybe you can take me to your office and let me bend you over the desk like you promised last night.”

*flails* As Nic said, the author is a total sweetheart and she deserves lots of love so go check out the story!

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Disciplined Breakdown by ahealthyaddiction

Official Description:

Bella Swan is smart and capable, beautiful and determined: the picture of success. The truth? It’s only her mask that’s flawless, and she’s desperate to stay hidden. He threatens her resolve; he might help save her. Can she let him? AU, all human, lemons.

Whether officially announced or because it hasn’t updated in at least six months, we deem this fic to be on hiatus. If you don’t like reading stories that might not complete, you might not want to start on this one. If you feel this status is in error, let us know, and we’ll check it out.

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