http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5541886/1/Laid_Bare
http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=9218

Official Description: Desperate to taste-unable to deny. A defective vampire-a deceptive human girl. Monster and man discovers primal urges he never knew existed. Can it ever be enough? To drink her is completion, to touch her is salvation.AU, ExB OOC,Canon pairs, very M rated

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stephk0525 says: Admittedly, I haven’t read a lot of AU in the fanfic world. I discovered the fandom less than a year ago and have pretty much spent my time in the AH realm of things. In fact, what brought me to Laid Bare was my love for the awesomeness of Brits23 and her wonderful stories “Show and Don’t Tell”/”SaDT Uncle EPOV”. She is an incredible storyteller and creates well-rounded characters. She also writes some damn juicy lemons and has a fantastic sense of humor.

One of the most intriguing things Brit does with “Laid Bare” is take some of the canon qualities of the Twilight world and shake ‘em the hell up. The first glimpse of Bella shows us all what we’re used to out of the canon version: dutiful daughter and model student with dinner waiting on the table for Charlie. The scant dinner conversation and Bella heading upstairs on a Friday night to do homework will lull you into a false sense of security, but don’t get too comfortable in what you think you know. Brit drops the anvil on your head with the following right away in Chapter 1:

“I fought back an eye roll and skipped up the stairs.

Once my door was cracked, I smiled as the familiar weekend scents reached me.

I stepped in and closed the door lightly, turning the lock with a soft click. I pulled my long hair out of my bun and ran my fingers through it, letting it fall to my lower back. A devious grin spread across my face as I spun around quickly. I slid off my long skirt and cardigan sweater, leaving me in nothing but my jean mini skirt and a white tank top.

“Alright, you mother fuckers,” I smirked, turning up the radio. “Deal my ass in and give me that fucking bottle.”

That’s right folks, poker night with the Quileute boys complete with booze and wacky tabacky up in her room while Chief Daddy Dearest sits downstairs completely oblivious. What is abundantly clear is that we have a very feisty, very opinionated and very different Bella than what we are used to. Despite her involvement with the Indian boys *coughcoughEmbrycough*, she’s already encountered Edward in class and knows he’s exactly what she wants. Bella hasn’t figured out how to snag him quite yet, but she’s determined Edward belongs with her.

Now, dearies, let’s talk about Edward, shall we? Okay, he’s a vampire. Check. He’s emo and self-loathing. Check. He’s fuckhawt gorgeous and after Biology class, has decided that Bella has reawakened him. Check and check. Again with a masterful twist, in Brit’s version of our favorite vamp, his venom is sterile and he lacks bloodlust. Say what? You heard me; his venom isn’t poisonous and human blood doesn’t do anything for him. Well, until he gets a whiff of Bella, and harkening back to canon Edward, he realizes he can’t stay away from her.

And let me just say that when these two get together, and yes, do they ever get together, I suggest you have a change of drawers, a towel or perhaps a wet/dry vac as these lemons are dripping with juice. *snorts* (I just said dripping…cue Beavis laugh here.) The chemistry between these two crazy kids is as raw and primal as I’ve ever read. Don’t be surprised to find your pulse racing and your breath getting heavier. These are entirely appropriate reactions to the smexin, trust me. Here’s a little taste from Chapter 8:

She smiled sweetly, running her fingers along my jaw. “This is heaven.”

I crashed my lips to hers, entwining our tongues and tasting the girl who knew exactly how I fucking felt. Who proved it to me further and further each day. I was rock hard inside of her once more, starting a steady rhythm as I grabbed her thighs and spread her wide for me. “I want to take you so deep, beloved. I want you to cum so hard,” I murmured against her wet lips. “It’s so difficult to control it, Bella. I want to take my time…fucking savor you like you deserve. But I can’t…stop this primal need to just take you. I’m so fucking sorry…”

She grabbed my face tightly in her hands and stared at me intensely. “Our first time together…you told me you were a man who wanted to worship me and a monster that wanted to spill my blood. I want you, Edward. The monster, the man, I want them both. Fuck, I want all of you,” she cried, crashing her forehead against mine as I deepened my strokes.

She whimpered into my open mouth as I slid my hand between us, pressing against her swollen clit and squeezing it between my fingers. She cried out against me, her nails dragging along my back as she pressed her hips fervently into mine. “I wish you could mark me, Bella. I wish your nails could dig into my back and your teeth could break my skin. I want you to hurt me, too.” My breaths were becoming labored again and I knew she was close, the air leaving her in gasping shudders as her muscles clenched tightly around my cock.

“That’s it, baby. Cum on me. That’s my girl,” I whispered huskily in her ear, my mouth dripping with venom and my fingers working her clit furiously as she exploded around me, squeezing my dick tight enough to send me over the edge with her.

Our bodies clenched together as I pumped her furiously with each spurt I gave her. She was full to the brim with our fluids and my throbbing cock. She was so wet I could barely stay inside of her properly, the sound of us giving and taking prominent in the room.

Feel free to join me in a collective “guh”, you know you want to.

Of course, the vast array of different fics result in the various “insertwhateverisficappropriatehere”-wards. We all know ‘em and love ‘em. But the Edward of “Laid Bare” has been christened with the moniker of “Bitey”, because, quite frankly, Bella is his favorite teething ring. And trust me, Bella has no complaints. In fact, she can’t get enough. Edward’s need to bite and drink from Bella is every bit as strong as her need for him to do so. So, while Bella is not in danger of Edward changing her (which is bound to become an issue later on I suspect), her safety is at risk of him being unable to stop drinking her blood. Yet another delicious twist on canon from Brits23’s brilliant mind.

Like I said, these two together are as explosive and carnal as anything I’ve read. In the reviews I’ve left Brits23, I’ve listed the many places where Bitey pwns me: in a chair, against a tree, against a wall…you get the idea. But truthfully, Bitey just fucking pwns me, hardcore.

So, for the love of all that is oral *snickers* (I just said oral…I’m usually much more mature than this, really) get your incisors and bicuspids over there right now and read this delectable morsel. You’ll be insatiable, always wanting more, the only thing sating your hunger is an update alert in your box. I personally can’t wait to see what other surprises and twists on canon the lovely and uber talented Brits23 has in store for all of us. I’m sure it’ll be positively scrumptious.

Kassiah says: S
o, I don’t know even know what to say. Everyone who knows me knows that I love Brits23′s SaDT Uncle E. I love him. He’s smart and cute and sexy. This Edward, though, my god. Hot doesn’t come close to describing him. Like stephk0525 said, Bitey is fuckhot. And Bella can’t get enough. Here’s a little snippet:

My trembling hand lifted from my side and covered his hand on my stomach, our fingers interlacing as he groaned softly behind me. “What do you see?” he murmured gently. My fingers tightened around his as I struggled to breathe, struggled to stay upright at the sheer intensity of this moment. Before I could answer, he walked us forward urgently, our joined hands slamming against the mirror as his arm wrapped around my waist. “Tell me,” he pleaded, his lips against my ear as our eyes enveloped each other in the mirror. “Tell me what you see.”

I swallowed thickly as the erratic breaths poured from my lips. The longer I stared at his ravenous expression, the more difficult it was for me to contain myself. I was losing control. “I see fucking everything. I see sex, and blood, and pain and life…I see the fucking meaning. Fuck, Edward, I can’t explain–” I drifted off in the middle of my desperate rambling, unable to describe something that surpassed all words and definition.

He shushed me softly, his chest heaving as his eyes continued to smolder into mine. Slowly his hand began to drift lower as he spoke. “Do you want to know what I see?” he hissed in a haunting tone. I whimpered in response as his hand drifted to the waistband of my underwear, and he continued. “I see a monster who wants to tear your flesh, crossed with a man who wants to worship the ground you walk and the air you breathe.” His cool fingers slid underneath lace and spread my wet pussy, diving in to feel the affect he had on me.

“Please, please, please, please,” I mumbled incoherently, my eyes fluttering closed as I lay my head against his neck. His fingers curled inside of me and I cried out sharply as he continued. “I see the meaning as well, beloved. In those fucking endless brown eyes of yours.” He leaned us closer to the mirror as his tongue dragged along my jaw line.

Yeah, there’s more to it than that. More to the scene and way more to the story than just the animalistic way they both need each other. Edward and Bella complete each other in a way that nothing and no one else ever has. Laid Bare is an awesome story–check it out!