A Room with a View by ShortHappyLife

Official Description: Endless scripts to read, a tyrant boss to tolerate, and a rather lackluster personal life. It was a good thing Bella Swan’s office provided the perfect view of the building’s hotshot lawyer. Now if only they’d share more than a glance each day. E/B


I have so enjoyed watching this lovely fic steadily gain attention and an ever-growing audience. When I added ARwaV to my alerts last month I had a feeling it was special. The first chapter just drew me right in – with sharp writing, an appealing Bella, a unique setting and quirky cast of characters.

Bella works at a literary agency in Beverly Hills. Her boss may be moody and eccentric, but her job offers significant perks – she gets to hobnob with the rich and famous and see the biggest scripts and screenplays to come along. But the highlight of her workday is catching a glimpse of the “Hot Lawyer Man” who passes by her open office door every day.

Glances and smiles are exchanged, but it’s a hallway collision that finally brings our pair face to face …

Spinning to head back into my office I spun smack dab into a crisp Prada suit. My face was shoulder level with the man and it was just right to get a significant whiff of his cologne. Cedar and spice and oh so nice.
Hands gripped my shoulders to steady me and I found myself looking into the eyes of the jade-eyed boy I ogled everyday. Realizing what a klutz he must have thought me I turned fifty shades of red.
“Sorry,” I mumbled. “I, um, didn’t see you.”
He smirked, “It’s okay. I should have been paying better attention.”
We stood in awkward silence for a moment and I pretended not to be enthralled by his square jaw and pouty lips. Kate always mocked me, but I was a mouth girl through and through. Pretty eyes were nice and a cute ass was a bonus, but a kissable mouth? That was vital. And this man’s mouth was obviously created just to make me lose my mind.

The jaw and the eyes and the kissable mouth all belong to one Edward Cullen, a hotshot lawyer who works on another floor in the building. A friendly lunch leads to a bona fide date and before long it’s clear they’re both smitten kittens. The more Bella gets to know Edward, the more she falls for him – and we can’t help but fall right along with her. (It’s no surprise ARwaV’s Edward was nominated for an Avant Garde award – “Best Edward” – because he’s sexy and smooth, but sweetly vulnerable too.)

The supporting cast is varied and eclectic: ex-manwhore musician (and Bella’s roomie) Jasper and his steady gal, Alice; office mates Garret and Kate and a (surprisingly) divorced Emmett and Rose.

A Room with a View is a light and refreshing read – low on deep drama, high on newfound romance. There’s plenty of snappy banter and a hilarious inner monologue, too. (The story is told in Bpov, but Epov outtakes are a possibility.)

I highly recommend this delightful story. ShortHappyLife has treated us to nine chapters so far and I’m excited to see where she takes us – and her characters – next!

Bella’s been ogling the ‘Hot Lawyer Man’ in her office building for months, and after they ‘run into each other’ (literally), she finally gets her chance to get to know him better.

I have to say that these two characters, and the way they meet, might sound cliched, but it’s really not. Bella’s feisty and Edward blushes and they’re just so freaking adorable together. This has very quickly become one of my new favorite stories; I’m enjoying reading about the budding relationship between these two and cannot wait to see what the future holds!

I must thank the hell out of xtothey for her mention of this over on Edwardville, after I saw the quote she posted, I had to read it. Let’s hope if my words don’t push you over, that the quote does the same for you!

Emmett threw an arm around my shoulder and steered me away from Edward, “You haven’t seen anything yet, missy.”
Edward followed us quickly and removed Emmett’s arm from around me, “Don’t scare her with your big paws, Em.”
Emmett scoffed and shoved Edward away, “If she hasn’t run away screaming from you yet, I think I’m safe. What, you afraid I’ll steal her from you?”
“It wouldn’t be the first time!” Edward huffed.
“Are you still on about Katie Murphy? I was ten! She was into older men, it wasn’t my fault!”
“Whatever. You knew I had a crush on her and you made her your girlfriend anyway.”
We had been slowly making our way downstairs, apparently we could walk to The Local Yolk from the beach side of the house. Carlisle was already standing by the gate that led to the beachfront sidewalk.
He gave me a smile, “Are they arguing about Katie Murphy?”
I nodded, smirking at Edward’s pout. Carlisle smirked back at me, “Edward was pitiful for weeks. He refused to talk to his brother, cried in his room, and composed a horribly sad song about the whole ordeal.”
Esme joined us then, having come from somewhere upstairs, “I actually considered putting him in therapy. He was such a deeply feeling little boy.”
I grinned and Edward blushed a shade of red I’d never seen before, murmuring, “Shut up. I was young.”

Trust me when I say you’re missing out on a great story if you’re not already reading this one!

If you are like me, the idea of a weak and horribly insecure Bella drives you crazy. That’s why I love this story so much. This is one of the best Bella’s I’ve seen.
The story is told from Bella’s point of view. She works for a literary agency in Los Angeles, struggling to work her way into the tough business. Every day she ogles the ‘hot lawyer man’ who works in her building but never has the nerve to talk to him. When she literally falls into him one day, things change for the better.
The inner dialogue and narration of the story is wildly entertaining and real. It highlights the amusing and uncomfortable moments that happen when you are first interested in someone.
Edward is an entertainment lawyer, who has a swagger that makes Bella swoon. He’s quirky and cute, and his confidence is very sexy. He even jokingly calls Bella out about her feelings, but Bella is quick with her responses.
Bella tries to play it cool, trying not to let on just how much she likes Edward. It’s so adorable how she struggles.

He moved back toward the bar to get our drinks and I intentionally didn’t watch his every move. First, I didn’t want to see anyone checking him out, possessive Bella would threaten to come out swinging and it was a little early in our relationship for that. Second, I could totally play aloof, despite the ache in my cheeks that proved my face muscles didn’t listen a whit to what I’d told them earlier. Oh, Edward, you’re leaving my side to go the bar where you’re sure to be hit on by the harpies that have been eyeballing you all night? That’s cool. Flirt with them, ignore them; I don’t care either way. I’m going to casually pretend to suddenly be enthralled with the song being played on stage.

The side characters in this story are equally entertaining. Jasper is Bella’s long time best friend and has no qualms embarrassing her in front of Edward, as you can see from the quote below. Of course, Edward also jumps right in.

I shook my head and pulled Edward out the door behind me, shouting my goodbye behind us.
“No glove, no love!” Jasper shouted back, right before the door closed. Jerk always had to get the last word.
I knew Edward was probably seconds away from stuttering out some gentlemanly denial of any plans to seduce me, which I was sure was the truth, so I let him off the hook as I tugged him along behind me. “Ignore him, please.”
“You mean I don’t have to wear a glove?” He replied innocently, making me stop in my tracks.
I turned to see the smirk and the swagger eyeing me playfully. Touché, lawyer man, way to keep me off your game. I tried to think of a witty retort, but swagger plus black-rimmed glasses plus his fingers laced in mine equaled one-track minded Little Miss Sunshine. I tackled him in the hallway.

Here’s another cute exchange between Bella and Edward. I just love these two, SFM.

I grinned, “So you really like me, huh?”
He smirked, “Yes. You ran into me that day in the hall and angels sang and stars aligned and our whole future flashed before my eyes. It was like the whole world had gone blurry and all I could see was you. Can we watch the movie now?”

In short, you’ll love the adorable characters. You’ll love the dialogue and their clever banter. This story makes me want to be back in that ‘butterflies in the stomach’ phase of my relationship. If you want something fun and witty, run, don’t walk to check this one out.

What can I add to these great reviews? This is my new favorite story, and I want everyone to read it. It’s snarky and fun, and I have high hopes for it being insanely hot. I love this Edward and this Bella and their fun banter. I love his parents and her coworkers, and I just want to kiss ShortHappyLife for writing such a great story. Read it, ya’ll. You won’t regret it!

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Grand Jeté by Stella Luna Sky

Official Description: She moves through her comfortable life without much passion, without much conviction. When she meets the man who can teach her the importance of treating transient life with respect and love, she has to take the grandest leap of faith she’s ever faced.



“She’s done playing safe. Done making small, cautious steps she defined as chances because she’d never tried them before. Chances aren’t sure things, and isn’t that what life is? Embracing that nothing is a sure thing?

She doesn’t know.

But she’s going to find out.”

Don’t you just love when characters have some big, great realization that life is more than just a day to day thing? That it’s about taking chances, and seeing where the load less traveled will lead you. I do. Which is why I think y’all should read this fic.

I became a fan of Stella Luna Sky’s writing after I read one of her one-shots a while ago. While I was rereading it a few weeks back, I clicked her profile to see what else she had written. And I found Grand Jeté, and have been in love ever since.

Bella is a college student and a dancer who knows she needs to branch out, but just isn’t sure how to. Enter Edward, the mysterious guy who she’s been noticing over the last few months in one of her classes. A chance smoke break leads to them talking, and the story sets off from there. There’s more to Edward than just the surface though, as Bella finds out along the way.

I really like stories where the characters speak and have such a clear voice that you can’t help but separate them from other stories. And that is so this story. The banter between Bella and Edward is great. It’s funny and quick, and leaves you laughing (or sighing, or swooning, or choked up…). I really like this Bella—she doesn’t take shit from Edward, and she gives him hell right back when he goes on pity party tangents. The premise is one that tugs at your heart strings, the writing is lovely, and the secondary characters are used in really great ways that add to the story rather than detract. I can’t say enough good things about this fic. I hope you guys will read it and leave the author some love; it’s one you shouldn’t miss!

Grand Jeté is a fucking spectacular story. There’s just no other way to phrase it, and you should stop whatever you’re doing right now, and go read and review the story.

I don’t even want to spoil a single thing about this story, because the way stella luna sky writes is so beautiful and not overdone, that I want you to experience it firsthand. There are no unnecessary words or descriptions here, as this story is currently 13 chapters and just over 52K words. SLS predicts the story will run only 20 chapters, something almost unheard of anymore in fic, but at the way it’s pacing, it will come in right at novel-length.

The chapters are easy to read and a nice size, making this story a pleasure to sit down and dive into. There is some angst, but not without cause. This is one of the most real stories I’ve read, with real characters that you can identify with and fall in love with.

The lemons are there, but not overdone, and not lengthy. They suit the tone and feel of this story so perfectly, though. Each one is a drop of refreshment and connection between the characters, and doesn’t feel added in to spice up the story or attract readers.

Bella isn’t your somewhat typical weak female lead, and in fact, chapter 11 shows you all you need to know about her. She’s brave, and fierce, and she’s ready to fucking fight for what she wants (and needs) in her life, even when Edward is being … Edward.

This Edward also isn’t your stereotypical feelings-gushing dude. He has feelings, he just isn’t the most effusive person, and he’s insecure. He has issues, and he knows it. He fears, and more than once, I was on the brink of tears while reading, so easily it was to identify with the feeling of new love and all of the insecurity wrapped up in it. Love doesn’t generally come easily or fast, and making it work, it’s not a snap of the fingers. It’s work, and these two work at it. This line in chapter 10 is a great illustration of that:

“I wouldn’t say it’s easy,” she counters, holding her hand out to him. “I would just say it’s worth it.”

This story is so beautiful and real, and the characters are so well written and touching. I’m so glad I dove in, and I can’t wait to go back and re-read each chapter as I leave some review love.

It’s easy in life to forget about what’s important. We all get caught up in the minutiae and take things and people for granted. Grand Jeté is a heartwarming story about living life to the fullest, even when facing death.

Bella feels drawn to Edward in ways she doesn’t understand. He’s sexy and mysterious, and unnervingly straight forward. She wants to understand him, to really know him, but he won’t let her in, despite wanting her more than he’s ever wanted anyone before. He thinks he’s protecting her because he doesn’t feel free to love. Cancer has made him feel like loving him is an unfair thing to ask of someone.

“I didn’t think anyone would ever want to love me,” he whispers against her cheek. “The disease – it’s not pretty. A relapse could happen any day. Any time. Right now, there could be cancer cells reforming. Love isn’t easy to begin with, but when you put this into the equation, it can be impossible.”
She shakes her head and kisses him again. She feels so fragile, like the air around them is going to shatter if she breathes too loudly. He groans quietly against her lips.
“This is going to sound cheesy… but it was never an option for me,” she says quietly. “I knew, going into this, that I would love you. That you would change my life. That you would teach me.”
“What could I teach you, Bella? You have everything at your fingertips. You’re beautiful, healthy, really fucking intelligent. You’re so… talented, with dancing and cooking and photography… and with people. You’re gentle. You can handle anyone. Me, Emily, your mom – we’re all different people, totally different. But you care for each of us, and never try to change us. You just – you just care. What can I teach you?”
She kisses him again because she can, because she’s so overwhelmed with this moment. “You teach me why all of that is important.”

Despite his fears, he eventually lets Bella in, and their relationship becomes intense and passionate. They laugh and love and even fight like any normal couple. She makes Edward feel alive for the first time in a long time, and he finally feels like he has a reason to fight. They’re adorable together, and their sexy times leave you wanting more.

“Space invader,” she grumbles, kicking off her flip-flops and sitting gracefully on bed. Far, far away from his body.
“No, no,” he chides, and grabs at her foot. He yanks her in his direction, and she screeches. “Come here.” He pats his chest.
He’s so weird. So strange – doesn’t he have any sense of chronological order? Date first, kiss second, make love third, cuddle in bed fourth.
“I have to know,” he says as she crawls over that way, “if we fit together this way. If we don’t… then what’s the point?”
“Right,” she murmurs, because she doesn’t really understand, but she wants so much to be close to him. She lays her head to his chest, and it’s like his heartbeat is right there, with no flesh covering its sound.

Even though they are happy, there is always more lurking under the surface. He’s had to endure chemo and all the struggles that go along with it. But the last thing he wants is pity, and that makes him independent, almost to a fault. Neither of them wants to face the possibility that his disease could creep back into their lives at any time, even though it never really left. It is a part of him, always.

He shrugs after a moment. “One night, Alice and I talked about what being cured really means, and how many people never see that day. Do you want to know the statistics?”
She blanches. “No, I really don’t.”
“You need to know them. They aren’t awful, but there’s still about half a chance I’ll die from the disease within the next five years.”
“Edward, for god’s sake,” she snaps. “I said I didn’t want to know.”
“I don’t know if I can really wrap my mind around it,” he continues. “Not reaching my thirtieth birthday. Not watching my hair turn grey, or my eyes turn wrinkled in the corners. All these signs of aging that people take for granted, I want. Is that weird? I remember talking to this old man once, in the hospital. He had leukemia too, but a kind that really only occurs in senior citizens. He said to me, ‘I don’t understand plastic surgery. I wear these wrinkles like a badge of honor.”

I had the hardest time picking quotes for this review, because there are too many great ones to narrow down. This story takes a very realistic look at moving past a horrible disease to live an enriched life. Don’t let this difficult topic deter you from reading this wonderful story. It’s not watered down, nor is it overly sappy and depressing. It’s just an honest look at love and life, told by someone who has a renewed lease on life.
I promise you’ll love this one.

What else can I say? I love this story, and I love this author. Read it, or you’re missing out on something amazing and beautiful.

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Bunny Does NYC by denverpopcorn


Official Description: 1974, Times Square – everyone’s working a hustle. It’s dirty, seedy, depraved, and graffiti’d. Follow a night in the life of Edward Cullen as he discovers a light at the end of the subway tunnel. Disco free. EPOV. Age of Edward 2010 entry.
Word Count: 12,355


This little gem earned the author, denverpopcorn, the award of Best New Author in the Age of Edward contest. Once you read it, you’ll understand why. It’s a very unique story, set in a 1970’s porn house in New York City. It’s obvious right from the beginning that the author knows New York and what it must have been like at that time. While reading, it was easy to envision how the city as well as the characters must have looked.

When we first meet Edward, he is working as a projectionist in a seedy porn theater as a side job, while pursuing his real passion- film direction. His internal dialogue is great as he watches his customers come and go, wondering what their stories are. When Bella stumbles in one night, he takes notice. Girls don’t usually come to the Skinerama alone.

Bella, whom Edward lovingly names Bunny, has just arrived in New York City and gets introduced to the harsh realities of life in the Big Apple very quickly. Thankfully she meets Edward, who shows her the better part of what New York has to offer.

The dialogue in this story is clever and sweet, and the even the side characters add dimension and flare. I haven’t read a fic with such diverse and amusing characters as this one in a while. The progression of Edward and Bella’s relationship is light and fun, but believable.
If you’re looking for a fun read, with endearing characters and great dialogue, give this one a glance.

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PunchDrunk by DragonsExist

Official Description: AU/AH OOC E/B Edward moves to Portland to start college and a new chapter in his life. After meeting a brown-eyed girl, he wonders if love is truly blind.


Before I start my review of the wonderfully-written Punch Drunk by DragonsExist, I have to admit that I’m a little biased and a lot proud of this story and the person who writes it. I beta this amazing fic, and I’ve enjoyed working with DE and watching the story unfold firsthand.

Edward Masen is a young man born of wealth and high socio-economic stature. But the expression ‘money can buy everything’ is one that really typifies his life. Edward’s absentee parents seem to have had a child merely because it was expected, and their lifestyle didn’t factor in the responsibilities of raising him. Instead, Edward is left mostly to his own devices under the semi-watchful eyes of long succession of nannies.

The result of growing up alone with parents who he could seemingly never please is an Edward who bears the weight of an extremely guilty conscience. He blames his parents’ lack of involvement in his life squarely on himself, and rationalizes that perhaps if he’d been a better son, they would’ve been around more.

As he enters adulthood, Edward slowly comes to terms with his relationship with his estranged parents and relies more on bonding with friends rather than family. That’s when he meets Bella. But as far as first meetings go, this one’s a disaster.

Why?

There’s a small misunderstanding. Edward mistakes Bella for the hired help. But his internal monologue describing the sight of her and how embarrassed he is says a lot about his personality:

Fuck me.
There was no way she should’ve been mistaken as anything but a deity. Her chocolate eyes drew me in and her smile was overwhelming; I couldn’t help but return it. Her long hair was pulled back into a high ponytail revealing her neck, and with my eyes l followed it down to her collarbone. When I noticed her red tank top, I smiled. Her shirt read, ‘’d hit that…with my car,’ and it had a beat-up red pickup in the background. I smiled even wider at our similar shirts, but realized I’d been ogling her chest. Despite my intent, I didn’t want her thinking I was an asshole and a pervert, so I turned away quickly, my bacon and eggs suddenly fascinating me.

Punchward is endearing and lovable while still sounding masculine. When I read his POV, I can very clearly picture an actual guy thinking and acting this way, which is what I love about him so much.
To complicate matters, Edward and Bella embark on a romance that somewhat unconventional given their different backgrounds. There’s a reason why Edward mistakes Bella for the hired help. And it’s one those cultural stereotypes that’s ingrained in us from the time we’re old enough to be aware of our surroundings. It’s unfortunate and shitty, but it’s real life.
You think I’m gonna explain more, dontcha? Too bad. Go read the story.

Most of the time when I read stories about Bella and Edward, I picture Rob and Kristen in my head. I can’t help it. I can almost visualize their interactions as I read the words on paper. Punch Drunk changed all that by forcing me to see a new Bella – a black one. It is storyline I’ve not read in FanFiction, so I was immediately intrigued.

I’ve been really into fics lately that force me to walk a mile in someone else’s shoes, and this one is no exception. It challenges the reader to understand all sides of the issue of racism, and I love that.
Bella and Edward both feel an incredible draw toward one another, yet each of them has to evaluate their own prejudices and personal history.

Edward is broken, virtually abandoned by those who love him, when he meets Bella. He unfairly forms opinions about her based on stereotypes. But she fascinates him, and he can’t stay away. She is everything he has been missing in his life. She is confident and stable, not to mention beautiful and smart.
Bella also approaches Edward with her own pre-conceived ideas about ‘white guys’. She’s been hurt in the past and doesn’t want to open those wounds, so she jumps to conclusions about what he wants from her and how he feels.

Punch Drunk provides insight into the challenges that inter-racial couples face every day. When it’s just the two of them, their love soars, but outside pressures weave their way into their lives – society’s expectations, family prejudice, friends’ betrayal, and feelings of inadequacy. But ultimately, their love for each other keeps bringing them back to one another. Bella and Edward fumble, making mistakes and judgments that get them into trouble. It makes for some fireworks! There are some funny parts as well, though, as they learn to laugh about some of their misguided assumptions. Did I mention that the lemons are hot as well?

Punch Drunk is a sweet story about seeing through bullshit to get to what’s important. DragonsExist does a great job highlighting the challenges that Bella and Edward face to be with each other. Trust me, you’ll love this story!

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TFLN: Happy Fucking Birthday, Edward by Shalu

Official Description: Entry for TLFN Contest. Bella stopped fantasizing and acted on her crush. However, it was a bit of a catastrophe. Was she victim of a cruel joke? Is this a poor summary? Find out. M for language, grapefruits, facepalms, and stupid texts. E/B, AU/AH
Word Count: 6,659


Adorable tale with a few unexpected turns. Shalu takes a night of would-be awesome and spins it on its head. You’ll laugh and cringe as Bella and Edward recount their awkward encounter in what should have been a night of passion. The tongue-in-cheek realism is refreshing as this could really happen to anyone. It breaks away from the cliched depictions of perfect and flawless HEAs.

I loved this O/S because it’s something that a lot of us (hopefully not just me) can identify with – obsessing over someone and making a drunken decision that comes back to bite you in the ass. This fic had me both laughing hysterically and cringing in mortification at the same time.

After reading several seriously angsty fics lately, this little gem was just what I needed to lighten things up. Bella hooks up with Edward in a flurry of hormones and then has to endure the embarrassing ramifications. But was it all for nothing? Is the lonely walk of shame unavoidable in such a situation?

Read it and see. It’s the perfect little dose of happiness if you’re looking for a reprieve from all the angst like I was!

This one-shot is fucking funny. That’s really all you need to know. Oh, and it’s written by Shalu, who wrote one of the best wall-fucks ever. Still need more?

Happy Fucking Birthday, Edward was written for the Texts from Last Night Contest in answer to the following prompt:

He came on my chest. Sat back and said “hey it sorta looks like lake michigan!” kill me now…

The story starts off with Bella texting Alice, asking to be picked up from Edward’s apartment. He’s the guy she’s been crushing on, (perhaps obsessing and stalkerishly watching from behind speakers or plants…, for six months, when they finally get it it on in an-almost drunken stupor. Bella explains, through texts:

Bellarina: Well, it WAS good for a while cuz he kisses me back LIKE WOW and there’s tongue and it’s delicious and awsum…girlybits all atwitter. So we end up going to his place. He tells me he’s wanted this since he met me, blah blah… I say me, too… Sweet. SO, uh…
Alice du Wunderkind: O. MAH. GAH. Don’t make me kill u. MORE.
Bellarina: So we get naked, finally, and HELLO PEEN! Anyway, I start things off with my hands, ya know? That’s fine and all until he cums less than 20 seconds later!
Alice du Wunderkind: U didn’t even get 2 teh sexn?
Bellarina: That’s what I’m saying.
Alice du Wunderkind: So then what happnd?
Bellarina: He came on my chest. Sat back and said “hey it sorta looks like lake michigan!” KILL ME NOW…
Alice du Wunderkind: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Bellarina: U r such a bitch.
Alice du Wunderkind: O come on, that’s funny…HAY, “CUM ON BELLA!” ahahahahahahaha
Bellarina: I so fuckn hate u right now.

Turns out, Edward doesn’t remember what happened and he had been working up the courage to talk to her, too. After quite a bit of humiliation, they decide to start over. I love that this Bella has such a real reaction and the inner monologue of both of them is absolutely total win. If you’re looking for a laugh, check out this fun, quick one-shot.

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