Six Different Ways Inside My Heart by april09-TW



Official Description:

Bella & Edward meet when she is diagnosed with a life threatening disease & he is recovering from knee surgery. She confides her fears to him; he changes his life because of her. A journey through the confusion, awkwardness, pain & beauty of first love.

Word Count: 89,854

I don’t have much luck with fic diving, so I rely on recommendations from others. I kept seeing teasers for this story on A Different Forest, but was hesitant to read it because it seemed very heartfail-ish. The teasers were so good, though. So good, that I started reading. I don’t regret that decision.

Six Different Ways Inside My Heart is a high school fic with canon pairings. It is all BPOV. We learn right up front that Bella is sick. I was nervous because, I am a nurse, and it’s hard reading a story where there is medical stuff and the author doesn’t have a clue what they are talking about. But, april09-TW has a clue. She is a doctor.

Bella meets Edward during her hospitalization. He seems sort of familiar with things and it leads to Bella wondering if something more is wrong with him than what he says. But, that’s not even really what the story is about. It’s about a girl going through a difficult time. We can only imagine what it’s like for her. The story is also about a boy, a boy who is drawn to this girl and wants to be there for her during this difficult time.

I like all of the characters. Bella is a sweet girl, just trying to make it through. Edward is the stuff of teenage girl dreams with a sweet personality to go along with it. The gang is all there, with a few different other characters. It is complete, which is a plus. She posted an epilogue, which wasn’t really necessary, but oh man. I loved it!

I hope you give this story a shot, even with this horrible review, she really deserves more reviews than she’s got.

 

I spent all day/night reading this lovely story yesterday, after seeing the banner and catching it in our rec list, I decided since it was complete that I wanted to give it a chance. I’m so glad I did. Poor april09 must think I’m crazy after the flaily reviews I sent to her, lol.

This is a story about beating the odds. Not just in life, but in love, too. It’s about learning just how much you can handle and getting pushed to your breaking point and finally realizing that no matter how bad things get sometimes, they can and usually will, improve.

Bella is a sixteen year old high school student who, after some illness, discovers that she’s suffering from leukemia. On her first night in the hospital, she meets Edward and there’s just this instant connection between the two of them that will warm your heart. These two fall fast and hard and they experience some bumps along the way, but that’s how life is sometimes, especially when you’re a teenage girl suffering from cancer.

And in this case, Bella’s lucky enough to find a boy who loves her through her illness. Who stays by her side through thick and thin and all the in betweens. Their story is beautiful and heartbreaking and I’m getting rambly, but I really loved it and I think you will, too. So go read it, and leave april09 some well deserved love!

 

This is one of those stories that I don’t really understand why it’s so under-appreciated. It’s amazing. It starts off with Bella freaking out, thinking she might be pregnant:

This is it, I thought as I regained focus in the nurse’s office. It was what I had been denying. I’m pregnant. Who gets pregnant the first time anyway? Who gets pregnant while using a condom? A condom that broke part way through a half ass attempt at losing my virginity with a guy I hardly knew and didn’t really care about. That’s what I get for wanting to get it over with.

But as I sat in the doctor’s office-with my mom in the waiting room-waiting for the doctor to come back to me with the results of the pregnancy test, her words started to make more sense to me. If you’re mature enough to have sex, then you’re mature enough to talk to your parents about the pill. Except it didn’t matter. Because I’m not going to have sex again. For now. And I’m not pregnant.

Turns out, she has leukemia. And she meets Edward in the hospital, where he is recovering from a knee injury.

This story has angst, but it’s not overwhelming. It’s realistic, and it’s hopeful. What it is is a sweet story about two people who meet each other in the most unlikely of places and fall in love. It’s complete, and I really hope you’ll check it out!

 

 

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A Player to Be Named Later by hmonster4 and TheHeartOfLife

Official Description:

Love is a combination of quantum physics, molecular attraction, & timing, right? Two people, brought together by fluke or divine intervention sticking true to the old cliché–you have to play 1 day at a time. A FGB novella by theheartoflife & hmonster4

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Unconventional by DazzlinSparkle05

Official Description: plan verb, planned, plan·ning. a specific project or definite purpose: plans for the future. A girl that lives by the definition and a boy that scoffs at it.


If you know me, you know I’m a sucker for a baby fic. It may be cliche, but getting knocked up happens. I came across Unconventional on the Pregnant Bella and Dad-ward Community on FF.net. I usually don’t have luck when fic diving, but I think this was a good day. The author says it’s not the typical baby fic and I would have to agree.

I won’t spoil all the little bits in the beginning, but let’s just say that Bella gets knocked up from a one-night stand with Edward. The how it happened and the where it happened are explained in the first chapter. What makes this fic different is, when she does find him to tell him, they don’t immediately fall back into bed nor does he deny the possibility that the baby is his. He just knows it is because he knows what type of a person Bella is. They calmly discuss “What do we do now?” As time goes on, as things happen, Edward becomes a good friend to Bella. He makes me laugh because he falls completely in love with the baby. He has no problems walking up to her, pulling her shirt up and kissing her belly. Like here:

He didn’t say anything, but he took the hem of my shirt pushing it up inspecting my stomach. He leaned his face down placing a kiss above my belly button.
“Have you ever heard of personal space?” I hissed uncomfortable with his actions.
“Oh I have, but you need to understand that as this is my child too I can do that.”

Bella is a planner, so this whole pregnancy (and other things) have thrown her into a world of unknowns. Edward is really good at calming her and taking care of her. It was a total win for me when he punched Jacob in the face and broke his nose. I was sold after that. He’s a man, not a pussy. People, he shaves her legs when she can’t do it herself and this is what was said:

“Come on,” I said standing up with her.
“What?” she froze.
“You’re going to have a bath and I’m going to shave those legs,” I explain halfway up the stairs.
“Ew, you can’t.”
“Bella, this is kinda my fault you can’t shave,” I said sitting her on top of the toilet seat.
“Isabella,” she pouted as I reached over turning the faucet on and put the stopper in. I played with the faucets until I was satisfied with the water’s temperature. I threw in a lot of bubble bath because girls loved that shit. I then went back to Bella lifting up the hem of her shirt. Her small hands stopped me and I looked at her.
“This is not friend appropriate,” she huffed giving me a warning glare.
“This me taking care of my child’s mother appropriate,” I shrugged. “Now arms up.”

Bella doesn’t think they have anything in common. She thinks they are too different, but as time goes on she starts to change her mind and is open to the possibility of something more once the baby arrives.

There are the usual cast of characters, but this story really focuses on the Edward/Bella relationship, which I like. This story, so far, is low on angst while not completely fluffy. I have really enjoyed it and I hope you will too!

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