http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5228178/1/The_Boy_by_the_Window

Official Description: Upon moving to Forks Bella becomes spell bounded by her elusive and mysterious neighbour. Small town gossip and far-fetched stories tell her to steer clear of the peculiar boy that watches intently from his window but her curiosity ignores all warning.
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Kassiah says: I have had the rec for The Boy by the Window up for weeks, but I haven’t written it out. Why? Because I don’t know what to tell you. I know you are thinking, “Great, Kassiah, why the fuck are you telling us to read this story, then?” It’s amazing. Well-written. Intriguing. It has one of the only Jakes I have ever liked. It is set in high school. I just don’t know what the hell is going on.
I looked around to see what others are saying about this Edward; he’s referred to as all sorts of -wards: Creepward, Crazystalkerward, Mindfuckward, Darkward, and my personal name for him WhatthehellisGoingOnwithhimWard.
The story starts off with Edward watching next door neighbor Bella from the window. They don’t speak to each other for weeks, and when they finally do it is so mysterious. Edward is callous, but Bella can’t stay away. I was so anxious for them to kiss, I think I threw stuff at my computer screen every time I thought it would happen. I don’t usually quote from far into the story, but this had to be said here:
He shot to her side and grabbed her arm harshly. “Don’t call me little anything,” he barked. “Every part me is foremost and dominant Bella,” he spat. “A little girl like you wouldn’t be able to handle it.”
“Try me,” she retorted, sizing him up.
He chuckled at her audacity. His eyes met hers, pressing his torso to the soft contours of her chest. “Make me,” he challenged. “Make me want you Isabella and I’ll show you every part you’re longing to see.”
Yeah. Just…read it. He’s manipulative but it almost makes me want him more. HopefulHappenings09 includes Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett, adding even more depth to this story. Personally, I just want more Edward. I want to know what makes him…him. I would like the story to move along a little quicker too.
If you like reading stories that mindfuck you, The Boy by the Window is for you. Give it a try.


















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