Negative Twenty and Falling by katinki

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COMPLETE O/S. Two weeks, a few cups of cocoa, a mountain of snow, a pair of mittens, and one Mr. Perfect-Gorgeous. I present to you: Skiward. Just a little bit of wintery fluff so that you don’t think I’m always so doom and gloom.

Word Count: 21,732

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An Angry Man by katinki

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Edward is a bitter, angry man, a man suffering the sins of his past. An emotional & physical recluse, he pushes everyone away. That is, until Bella, a mysterious woman with her own demons, enters his world and forces him to face himself. AH

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Pwns of the Week – 4/14/11

Every week, we mention the stories that are pwning us~fics that we are just so darned excited about, we can barely think of anything else. We asked you to tell us what’s pwning you and you answered! The top five plus five randomly chosen (using random.org) make up this week’s TEN FICS THAT PWN YOU!

Please note, the Pwns of the Week come from our readers–they are TOTALLY reader-submitted (except for the Lesbison pwns). We don’t check the links, we don’t verify graphic content, we don’t look to see if someone copied someone’s reasoning for pwnage. Not trying to be mean about it–we just don’t. We thought our readers would like to know what our other readers are reading (damn, that sounds wordy). In any case, we hope you’ll check out these stories, but please realize that unless it has been recommended by us in a full post or as one of our personal pwns, proceed with caution. You should do that anyway–we’ve been known to like some crazy stuff!

A Voice in the Darkness by: katinki
Summary: My name is Isabella. Just Isabella. Everything has been taken from me. I am one of the unseen. I am one of the unheard. M/Dark-Graphic-Violent/Please see warning before reading.

Why this fic pwns alzzu: I realize this has story has already been featured at Fictionators, and very recently at that, but it deserves all the promotion it can get.
The author is not kidding when she says it’s dark, graphic and violent. She also calls it awful and disturbing. It is. In fact, I think it’s probably one of the most disturbing and awful stories I’ve ever read, and I’ve read a lot. The subject matter is horrible, but the writing is amazing, and it truly feels realistic, and in my opinion, that’s what makes it so disturbing. Because this feels real, it feels like it could happen, and unfortunately, it is happening all over the world right now. Another thing that made it resonate is I’m only a little older than Bella in this story, and I know that with a little bad luck, just being in the wrong place at the wrong time, I could actually become just like her. And with a little more bad luck, there would really be absolutely nothing I could do.
I know that saying a story is horrifying and will likely cause you to lose some sleep isn’t exactly a glowing endorsement, but in this case, I mean it as a compliment. It’s a change in perspective, and sometimes it feels like we could use it. Because not everything Edward does is okay just because he’s Edward.


Empires of the Mind by: Hibbleton78
Summary: When Bella learns her “ability” is more than a quirk, she must work with new friends to thwart the corrupt organization looking to exploit their powers for personal gain.
Why this fic pwns Arabella: This story has an interesting plot and build-up. The traditional Cullen kids are an all-human “dream team” of supernatural talents, wanting only to be left alone. They come across college student Bella and convince her to join their clan when it’s clear that her telekinesis is no longer a secret. Very unique and very fun to read.


Foul Territory by: rinabina
Summary: After being dragged to a baseball game by her best friend, Bella Swan meets handsome first baseman, Edward Cullen with the help of a rogue foul ball. There’s something about him that she can’t put out of her head, and apparently neither can he. E/B AU AH


How Can I Help You? by: sugunary
Summary: After years away, Bella Swan returns to a place she thought she left behind, and someone she wasn’t sure wanted to see her, ever again. A story of how your life can change when you least expect it.
Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Drama – Chapters: 22 – Words: 111,534 – Reviews: 239 – Updated: 4-11-11 – Published: 1-18-11 – Bella & Edward

Why this fic pwns Angela: This is a great story of first, second, and third chances at love. A teenage Bella meets a happily married Edward and develops a crush then tragedy strikes and things progress but the timing isn’t right. Bella moves on but years later they meet again while she is separated from her husband but outside forces keep them apart. Finally they reunite and they find out who is responsible for keeping them apart and you get to read about how they piece back together their family. There is no cheating in this story.


It’s Not The Life It Seems by: ParkerJ
Summary: Bella & her twin plan a short-term switch. Edward meets Bella acting as Marie. What happens when she goes back to being Bella? Don’t let the # of reviews hold you back from reading this story. I uploaded the 1st 8 chapters without waiting for reviews.
Twilight – Rated: M – English – Angst/Romance – Chapters: 19 – Words: 123,460 – Reviews: 100 – Updated: 2-28-11 – Published: 10-16-10 – Bella & Edward

Why this fic pwns Decca: So it’s The Parent Trap–Twific style. Bella is the innocent, sheltered and domestically inclined girl we all know, while Marie’s life has been royally screwed up, mostly by a neglectful mother. They switch places and Bella slowly realises what exactly her twin has been going through. She meets an Edward who dislikes Marie but finds himself strangely drawn to this new version of her. Marie, conversely, is instantly smitten with Bella’s best friend Jacob, who is way more perceptive than the girls had bargained for. There is intricate and disturbing back story, spark-creating interaction and a good dose of angst. Personally, I am on tenterhooks for the next chapter.


Lingering Shadows by: mamasutra
Summary: She married the man of her dreams, but how will she find her happily ever after when she can’t step away from a past that overshadows their life? How do you fight a ghost? How do you outrun a phantom of perfection that you can never live up to?
Why this fic pwns IcarusToSun: Lingering Shadows by mamasutra only has a handful of chapters up so far but I can really tell that this will be good. Very few stories, and I mean very very few, can make me this emotional. The last one I recall was Emancipation Proclamation. In Lingering Shadows, things start off very mysteriously with Bella lying in a pool of her own blood and Edward going frantic. Not many clues are given in the prologue. Then the story goes back into the past, opening with Bella at her grandmother’s funeral with a little hint of her encountering a grief stricken Edward attending his wife’s funeral service at the same place. There’s so much promise in there that I can hardly wait to find out how things will unfold. I strongly recommend it.


Picture This by: MadamThang
Summary: Edward is a reluctant celebrity, Bella a closeted photographer assigned to bring him to life. EPOV mostly, AU / AH / OOC.
Why this fic pwns Cathleen: Because it’s so so much more as this little summary will tell you! It’s flawlessly written and the idea is great. It has secrets and mystery and sexy times and a little drama and it’s simply well-conceived and will remind you every so often of our sexy Robward. :)
Please mention this story. It truly earns it.


Seven Day Weekend by: JandMsMommy
Summary: They were young, in love…and they raised hell for seven days. AH, E/B, Very OOC, lemons, Promised HEA
Why this fic pwns Misti: This story is very different than anything I have ever read. It takes place in 1957. Bella & Edward are both living life as two kids in love & then Edward does something that changes everything. And they have to go on the run. But it’s the journey these two take together that is the real story. Please give it a chance!


Sexy Silk by: jlho
Summary: Bella is a smart mouthed,celebrity hating P.A. to a Hollywood Stylist. Edward is an arrogant Hollywood playboy. What happens when their paths cross on the night of the Globes? Rated M for swears and lemons.
Why this fic pwns Amber: LEMONS. LEMONS. LEMONS. LEMONS.
That’s is one of the main reasons why I love this story. jlho’s Lemons are some of the hottest that i’ve read. She’s got crazy talent when it comes to lemons, Like change your panties after each lemon, kind of talent. Her snark is pretty awesome too. Snark and Lemons are my two favorite things that make up a story, and jlho does both of them PERFECTLY. I love love love love love this story. HARD.


We Were Here by: sweetlolapop
Summary: Upon waking, there’s a brief, blissful period in which you don’t yet recall the sins of the night before, but eventually, you have to open your eyes. I’m Bella Swan, seventeen years old, cheerleader. This morning I woke up in the wrong bed.
Why this fic pwns TwiSherry: Headboard.
Need I say more?


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A Voice in the Darkness by Katinki

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My name is Isabella. Just Isabella. Everything has been taken from me. I’m one of the unseen. I am one of the unheard. M/Dark-Graphic-Violent/Please see warning before reading.

Word Count: 12,237

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Night Must Fall by katinki

Official Description: In a world of night, of darkness, shadows known as the Volturi reign supreme. Their word is law, unquestioned and unchallenged. A word has been spoken. She has been condemned to die. AU/M for themes/violence/language/sexual situations.


When I saw one of my favorite authors, Katinki, had put up a new story, I gave it a try despite my general avoidance of overtly dark themed stories. Oh, am I glad I did! Her vividly sensuous imagery, the flowing cadence of her writing, and the entrancing eloquence with which this dark and tortured Edward speaks to us through her words, has me completely hooked!

The scent of it coated his nostrils and flooded his long-petrified lungs. It smelled otherworldly, rich and spicy. It was luscious and purely primal in nature. It smelled delicious, and his mouth instinctively watered, dripping in long, clear strands of venom at the thought of sinking his teeth into soft, buttery human flesh.

If you are at all like me the idea of Aro having control over Edward’s gift is an intriguing one. It makes me wonder if an Edward who has not had the benefit of Carlisle’s teachings would be able to resist the siren call of Bella’s blood at their first meeting. I am excited to say Katinki has presented us with a story that explores these very ideas in her latest story Night Must Fall.

Here we get an Edward with a whole new reason to be dark and brooding…he is one of the Volturi and so must feed on the innocent, and be the unquestioning extension of his Master’s arm…even when it means investigating one Isabella Swan.

Dark, mahogany hair with equally dark eyes, her image was clear and vivid in his mind. Her eyes, an unexpected amber-flecked russet brown, were liquid and alive, and they held a depth that gave away wisdom beyond her few years.

Bella, who is intriguing in the extreme in this incarnation, is a graduate student living in New York who after having been suddenly abandoned by her dearest friends, the Cullens, four years prior. To cope with the loss she is using the guise of her thesis research to look for empirical proof of that vampires really do exist. Just as she finds critical information she’s been looking for, she gets a mystifying and long awaited call from Alice. And it’s not good.

“Bella, please!” Alice begged, her voice climbing in volume. “Just leave! Go anywhere! You have to listen to me. Get out!”

Through Edward’s eyes and insight we get a deeper look into the inner workings of the Volturi (including delightfully fresh insights into Demetri and Jane’s gifts), along with how their casual brutality is chilling with just the right dash of humor to make it even more captivating.

At the end of the first five chapters we’re left wondering how Carlisle’s connection with the Volturi is different in this universe, just how Edward came to be a member of the Volturi Elite Guard, what Alice saw that has her desperate to keep Edward from finding Bella, and what’s going to happen when he does. I’ve got my seat belt securely fastened and I’m ready for one heck of a ride!

Wow. I am almost at a loss for words. Almost.

Reading this fic was a huge stretch for me, and something that I probably wouldn’t have done if it weren’t for The Fictionators. Now here I am curious, and anxious for more.

Night Must Fall is dark, twisted, and definitely not for the weak of heart, but in between all of that is something else.

katinki use of descriptions is breathtaking…

Amongst the olive skin and dark hair of the masses, with his pale-white complexion and riotous bronze hair, Edward was hard not to miss. But he’d learned long ago that hiding drew even more attention, attention of the unwanted variety. So, to avoid it, he feigned humanity; he pretended to be one of them. And as such, he was but a fleeting memory in their minds, the handsome and smooth stranger, the man they wanted to see.

He laughed at the right moments and he tipped generously, all the while fluently speaking his thanks in their native tongue, but with the deliberate accent of an educated foreigner. When wandering eyes met his, if but for a brief moment, he flashed a gleaming, megawatt smile, distracting them from the blood-red color of his irises. Unwittingly, given enough time under his inspection, the human defense mechanism, some secret, deeply buried instinct, would kick in. Those traveling eyes would fall away, and their owner would quickly depart the danger he only subconsciously recognized.

Sometimes, meandering amongst them made him feel almost as though he were one of them, a confusing sensation of almost belonging. He could almost forget his ties and bindings. He could almost be the person he projected. Yet other times, coursing through the overheated space and hearing the thwacking of their gurgling veins made him feel colder than he already was; it made him feel all the more foreign, all the more alien and alone.

Even after only four chapters she’s made her characters lovable.

Bella clutched the book she’d picked up to her chest and grinned, seeing Angela’s quick turn and appraisal over the top of her thin-framed lenses. “Don’t start, Angela. Just don’t go there. I know I’m just as bad. And so are you. So let’s just laugh at your boyfriend.”

With a quick shake of her head, Angela answered, her voice on the verge of laughter, “Okay fine. I won’t say a word. Nope, not one word. But seriously, Bella, if I were in your shoes, I don’t know how I could sleep at night, what with all the time you spend reading those horror stories.”

Teasingly, Bella scoffed and answered formally, “Not horror stories, Ang. Let me remind you, I am an anthropologist. Or at least I will be if I can ever finish this damned dissertation. I study people, not literature. I read the stories to understand the people.”

If you think you can handle it, this story is without a doubt worth checking out.

I need someone to make me a blinkie that says “SD <3s AU" because for as many good AH stories as there are out there, I fall ass over elbows for a great AU every time. katinki doesn’t disappoint in Night Must Fall, creating a story that can be appreciated by lovers of E/B, AU, Darkward, Volturi, and angst alike.

The premise is simple, but the plot is unpredictable. Edward is a member of the Guard, red eyes and all, and he is sent to check up on the Cullen coven, as well as a certain human girl who knows too much. We don’t know the full story behind Edward or his change, but we understand that he is coveted amongst the Italian family, wearing the darkest robes alongside Jane and Alec. He doesn’t necessarily relish his life, but we also don’t see him make any attempts to change it.

Upon visiting the States, things get a little more complicated. He meets the Cullens and uses his powers to discover why two of their family members – Jasper and Alice – are missing during his meeting. But as we all know, there’s little that can be hidden from our favorite mind reader, and a few details are revealed to him.

Meanwhile, Alice contacts the human girl she and her family abandoned to protect her, trying to keep Bella safe from the Guard member who is coming after her. But Bella doesn’t listen, of course, and we soon find Edward in pursuit of not only the girl he’s meant to retrieve, but the blood he’s enraptured by.

In the latest update, things take a sharp turn…perhaps for the better, where Bella’s life is concerned, or perhaps for the worst, if Edward truly tortures her as he imagines.

Half-crazed, each step forward carried with it a hundred ways in which he could take her. By the time he reached her door, her scent was nearly intolerable, filling his lungs and nostrils to the point where all he could smell was her blood’s elixir.

Her blood was too pure and too fine to waste in a hurry. Already decided, he would spirit her away and hide her so that he could savor every drop, so that he could make this perfection last as long as possible. Just the thought of tasting this girl shook his body; hard, rolling shudders coursed up and down his spine as he imagined taking her. Over and over, his teeth would pierce her flesh and find her pumping veins. He could already feel her supple curves giving beneath his trembling hands. His body suddenly felt warm, hot even, alive. Pushing every other sound away, a thumping beat pounded in his head, his mind’s imagining of her thundering heart. He would hold her for days – weeks even – teasing himself by keeping her alive.

“Mine,” he hissed as he splintered through the heavy oaken door.

Well HFS, do you have any guesses about what’s going to happen? I sure don’t, but I’m anxious to find out! Come read with me, and after you do, let’s chat about this story!

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