Damned If You Do by KristenNicole

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5298597/1/Damned_If_You_Do
Word Count: 6,440


Official Description: One-Shot for the “Love For The Unloved” Contest. Lauren Mallory might be high maintenance, but she has her reasons. Lauren/Jessica SLASH. AU.

MsKathy says: One of the things I love most about Damned If You Do is the way Kristen Nicole captures that youthful nervousness about sexuality. Moments like this, at a seventh grade sleepover:

Am I thinking about her… boobs?

The way Lauren’s character is written, you can’t help but be sympathetic to her plight. She takes her inner struggle and turns it back out as anger and aggression, something that happens a lot in life.

Lauren’s love of Jessica was built and paced extremely well, and the night of prom, Jessica decides to go over to Lauren’s house after Mike breaks up with her. The inner thoughts of poor Lauren just kill me every time, ie:

Her boobs looked like they were about to spill right out the top, and they drew my eyes like magnets. Damn it damn it damn it, look at her face.

It’s something I could honestly find myself thinking, and so the giggles were a little hard to contain.

Jessica catches Lauren in the middle of, shall we say, less than innocent computer activities. Imagine her surprise when Jessica wants to see more.

Even when the girls get down and dirty, realism is not checked at the door, as Jessica worries about tasting gross.

Sexytimes ensue, and then we’re left with this:

I waited nervously, positive that she was now going to collect her things and go home. My heart was thumping erratically in my chest and my eyes burned, ready to shed buckets of tears.

You’ll just have to read it to find out if Jessica leaves and breaks Lauren’s heart or not. This is one of my favorite pieces of femme slash, a very overlooked genre in this fandom. Give it a try, I know you’ll love it.

The Caged Bird by KristenNicole

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5124537/1/The_Caged_Bird
http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=5643


Official Description: All Human AU – Shy Bella Swan lives with her religiously zealous mother, Renée. When she has a chance meeting with town hellion Edward, Bella begins to realize that perhaps the sheltered life she’s been leading isn’t so much a comfort as it a cage.


manyafandom says: Oh My Frilly Heck I­ love this story. I really do. My pal ninapolitan kept going on and on about this story so I gave it a try and devoured it in one sitting. This Bella is a one of my favorites of all times. She’s sheltered and stilted in her life by her devout overbearing mother. She has no understanding of how the real world works or how to interact in it. Her whole world revolves around school, church, her mother and working part-time in the library. Where one day she runs into Edward, no really she RUNS into Edward with a library cart. Hilarity ensues. I know this sounds like a total angstfest, but trust me it isn’t. Bella’s thoughts, her way of thinking, the situations she finds herself in and the way she reacts to them is all done in a very funny way. There’s a bad girl in Bella screaming to get out and the appearance of Edward in her life seems to be helping Bad Bella along. Seriously, go read this right now.

Kassiah says: What words can I use to tell you about the utter genius that is The Caged Bird? I don’t have them; I cannot form them. Like the description says, Bella lives with her freakishly-religious mother and leads a completely sheltered life, including attending Forks Christian Academy. She’s at a point in her life where she is on the brink self-discovery. And I am not just talking about the with the shower-head kind (but, um, that happens too). In the 11 chapters that are out so far, Bella experiences so many firsts: kiss, waves of lust, secular music, standing up to her mother, standing up for herself, plus so much more. The author takes us on Bella’s journey with grace and such realistic descriptions, it is simply amazing. Each chapter begins with a well-chosen poem and Bella’s inner monologue is so spot on for someone going through the things she is experiencing, I feel like I am right there with her. And for many of the scenes, I wish I was, especially in the supply closet and the nonfiction section. This isn’t just about Bella. Edward is a fuckhot cursing doc-wearing bad-boy with calloused fingers and a way with words. There’s even OJ. I mean, what else can I say? Without a doubt, The Caged Bird is one of my favorite stories and Kristen Nicole is the author that I am gonna keep my eye on. If you aren’t already reading this, do not wait anymore. Read it. Right now.

MF’er says: I don’t have much to add as Kass and Hope have pretty much said it all. Seriously if you want some fun, fluffy… bad boy Edward with a hidden sweet side and good girl Bella with a hidden naughty side… This is for you! Just go read it, trust me when I say you will not be disappointed.