A Little Crazy by LolaShoes and tby789

A Little Crazy by LolaShoes and tby789
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5343033/1/A_Little_Crazy
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5343041/1/A_Little_Crazy
http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=7617
Word Count: 10,999


Official Description: Edward is the new, mysterious tenant across the street. Bella has spent her whole life here. Can he convince her that life isn’t a place, but what you keep with you? Originally an entry for algonquinrt’s Parkaward Contest by tby789 and LolaShoes

Check out the Audio Recording by @moijojojo on Lola’s blog or on Christina’s site.


Kassiah says: Everyone knows how much I love tby789 and LolaShoes. I was so excited when I found out that they were teaming up to write an entry for the Parkaward Contest, and without a doubt this story is total and utter win.

I have a sick obsession with tattward but my god this is tattward like you’ve never seen. Tatteduppiercedparkaward. He’s hot.

He was beautiful and shirtless, his arms covered in blues, reds, and yellows. His hair was damp from sweat and his shorts were drenched with water from the bucket on the ground. I let my eyes linger on his arms, on the stories they told above the rippling muscles of his forearms and the taut lines of his biceps. His back was bare but for words in black along his lower spine.

Edward moved in to a house next to Bella’s. She baked him a pie.

“Hi,” I smiled. “I brought you a pie.”

His eyes broke from my gaze abruptly and looked down at my hands. “For me?” he asked, grinning.

I nodded, looking at the blue and red ink spanning his neck. “It’s what I do whenever someone moves into this house.”

His face registered this, and what looked like disappointment and excitement mixed over his features. His lips pressed together in recognition that other lips had tasted pies that I made just for them. His eyes shone when he guessed that I had only ever blended color like this for him.

“I went a little crazy with yours,” I confirmed, nodding to the pie. I bounced on my toes on the hot porch.

He took the pie and lifted the corner of his lip as he smiled. “I like a little crazy.”

I laughed and turned to leave, waving at him quickly. “Bye colorful neighbor guy.”

“Bye a-little-crazy neighbor girl,” he murmured.

And so it begins. They watch each other a bit, have dinner, and fall in love despite their differences in opinions, particularly about home.

“How long have you lived here?” he asked, his soft eyes full of genuine interest.

I shook my head distractedly. “In this town, my whole life. Across the street, three years.” His eyebrows rose. “What?” I asked, confused by his expression.

“That’s just,” he trailed off and shrugged. “I don’t know, hard for me to comprehend. Don’t you ever get the urge to just leave? To see new things?” His voice didn’t carry judgment; he was simply curious.

I considered this as my eyes followed the vivid blue ink that wound up his forearm and disappeared under the sleeve of his t-shirt. A river perhaps. From what I’d seen, his tattoos were all that way. Not shapes or drawings from a book, but his memories. Scenes of mountains and rivers, lush trees and thick vines. They told a story.

I met his eyes again. “My life is here.”

“But is your life a place? Or is your life made up of the few important things you can carry with you?”

I sat back, resting against a box behind me. “I guess I never thought about it that way. To me, I suppose, my world has consisted of what I’ve known – this town, my home. I’ve never ventured beyond it.”

“Maybe you just haven’t found what you want to keep with you.”

I love this story because the dialogue and the feelings are just so real. I love that in just a one/shot, Lo and Christina have created an entire world for us to love and enjoy. I love that it’s also fucking hot:

I pulled my head up and our eyes met. His were heavy and dark and his breathing was choppy. Lust spiked beneath my sternum and ran down my abdomen. “Show me?” I breathed.

His eyes dropped to the space between us and I rested my forehead against his again as his hand moved to cover mine. He shifted my grip up slightly before squeezing his hand around my fingers, tightening my grip. With a slow, smooth movement, he shifted our hands down, pulling his foreskin over his piercing in the process, and back up again, covering the head of his cock.

“You don’t have to be tentative,” he murmured. “It just makes me… sensitive.”

I repeated the action and felt his hand loosen and then release mine. My thumb reached his tip and I flicked it gently over the top, spreading the moisture around before stroking down again, his skin covering the piercing quickly in the downward movement. He moaned and his head fell back. His Adam’s apple bobbed as he swallowed heavily.

“God,” he hissed in a trembling breath. His hands moved up to cup my face, pulling me towards him and kissing me roughly. “That’s just… ” he trailed off, letting his teeth run over my bottom lip.

A Little Crazy is a great one/shot with an amazing plot, believable dialogue, fuckhot smexin’, and a tad bit of angst-not to mention that you get to listen to Moi’s sexy voice with the audio file. Trust me and go a little crazy yourself.

This Hungry World by LolaShoes

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5667806/1/This_Hungry_World


Official Description: Sequel to A Life Extraordinary. Love beyond sanity meets the real world, and both Bella and Edward struggle to find balance. How does forever look with your beloved when you want to own every second of every day? AU, Rated M for…oh, you know why.


vickitori303 says:

I generally don’t read AU fics, but every once in awhile there’s one that just draws you in and you can’t ignore it nor get enough of it. I’m talking about LolashoesLet Your Light Shine” followed by “A Life Extraordinary” and now “This Hungry World”. That’s right the Blissward and Vampella that we all love so much are back

I pretty much squealed when I was asked to guest review her sequel fic to ALE, but then I got all nervous. How do you put into words the amazingness that Lola has created? The fact that Lola wrote it should be reason enough to go read it. But if that doesn’t get you running to FF then let me try to explain why you should.

In “This Hungry World”, we move from the Pacific Northwest to New England, New York to be exact to attend the Culinary Institute of America with Bella, Edward and Jasper. For the Cullens it’s a new adventure at trying things they love; for Edward and Bella, it’s a chance for them to find a balance as they enter the real world out of their comfort zone of Forks. Even though you know that these two can pretty much accomplish anything together, they still have their fears and insecurities about what lies ahead.

“Will we be split up?” she asked quietly and suddenly.

It was an obvious question but it shook me that I hadn’t considered what it meant. Most likely we would be split up during orientation and during classes; perhaps even most of the days at times. Neither Jasper nor I were sure to be able to watch over her, reassure her, guide her. She would have to be on her own in the same world but with a new body and a vastly different mind.

“Probably.” I tried to keep my voice mild and unconcerned as I looked away and up at the stars. I wanted her to believe that I wasn’t worried about how she would fit in, although admittedly I was. It had been so long since we had been around groups of humans. At Canlis we had only ever worked with Chef Pélu and a couple others, never with a large staff. Bella hadn’t been around more than three humans at a time in months. I didn’t know how it would affect her gift, her habits, her confidence.

I cursed my lack of planning, my selfishness. I cursed my need to keep every second for myself, for keeping her sheltered and inexperienced.

I felt her turn to look at me, assessing my tone. I knew she saw through my attempt at nonchalant. “Yeah,” she breathed, before I felt her look away again.

We gazed up at the sky for a while, lost in our own thoughts: thoughts of everything new ahead of us. I wasn’t yet sure that I could pull off the cooking thing regardless of my gift. She wasn’t sure she could pull off the human thing regardless of her control. In either case, we were both mostly powerless to help the other very much.

It was a new world for both of us.

Bella is just wrapping up her first year as a vampire and entering the world of college for the first time. Lola has a way of displaying the real emotions that people would feel facing these type of events in their own lives. In both chapters 2 and 3 we get a sense of Bella’s fears and nerves, the same kind that pretty much everyone feels the first day of orientation or school. Lucky for Bella, though, she has her husband and brother in law to help her get through it, oh, and a psychic sister in law to tell her what to expect. Lola had me reminiscing about my own college experience as they toured the campus then separated into groups to talk about themselves and meet their fellow classmates. This is really the first time Edward, Bella and Jasper interact with new people since Bella’s transformation and it’s quite amazing to see how much more sure of herself and outspoken she has become with people she doesn’t even know. We are introduced to new characters, some that I think will be fun, causing plenty of laughs and others that I think will cause some headaches such as Chef DeVries and a cocky ass named Andy. I’m excited to see what she plans to do with these new people. I have a feeling that all three of them, Bella especially will be pushed.

The amazing thing about her Edward and Bella is their relationship and Lola never fails to show the reader the strength behind it, especially their physical one. In ALE we’re treated to nearly 47 chapters of smut so you know that lemons will not be lacking in “This Hungry World”. We know that Edward and Bella are into some kinky stuff and are insatiable for each other and that is proven even more when Bella is left to decorate their new house in New Haven.

“A TV?” I asked, feeling a smile tug at my lips.

“For home movies only,” she whispered, threading her fingers into my hair. “No cable or satellite.”

~~

There were probably thirty pictures of us, all black and white, all different sizes, artfully tiered and layered across the simple cream paint.

The remaining images were ours and ours alone to see, and I groaned as I took each of them in. They were neither chaste, nor simply suggestive. They were outright pornographic, and they were divine.

Bella’s small hand wrapped around my erection.

My face between Bella’s legs; my mouth was buried in her soft folds and my eyes were closed in complete bliss.

Since LYLS, Edward and Bella have been trying to find that balance between their constant need to be with each other, to spend time with their family and do the things they love. That struggle is going to be even harder with them attending school, but I have a feeling that our Blissward and Vampella will accomplish it together, just like they do everything else. The story is only 3 chapters in, possibly 4 by the time this is posted so you have plenty of time to catch up if you aren’t up to speed yet. Plus, if you’re a visual person like me, then you’ll love that Lola has a blog to go with this story where she posts yummy picture teases.

MF’er says: Blissward is love. That’s all there is to it. If you’ve been living under a fucking rock and have not already read Let Your Light Shine and A Life Extraordinary by now, I have to shake my finger at you and give you the *sternface* because you are seriously missing out.

Cannot wait to see where the new journey leads these wonderful characters that Lola has created! Cooking school, of all things. Who’d have thought? I can see there will be new friends, new places to live (and hump) – new bedrooms (filled with fuckhot pictures) and just blissful reading that leaves me smiling at the end.

There can never be enough Blissward. :)

Kassiah says: It’s no secret how much I love this Edward and this Bella and this author. I have been waiting for This Hungry World for what feels like practically forever. Even just from the standpoint of how Jasper is going to fare for the first time around humans without feeling bloodlust fascinates me.

Where LYLS was about the honeymoon and the change, and ALE was about their relationship and dealing with what that means, THW deals with them, understanding and embracing the way they feel about each other and how that relates to everything else.

“You seem to be the only one who isn’t doing something for himself.”

His expression softened in understanding. “I am,” he insisted, looking at me. “I am doing this for myself. I get great enjoyment out of watching you explore the world. I love watching your jitters, your excitement, even your anxiety because I see how real and how raw it is.”

“Is that it?” I couldn’t decide if I felt guilty for holding him back from something or frustrated that he wasn’t insisting on having his own adventures, too.

“Isn’t that enough?” he asked, letting some of his frustration out now. “Bella, I’ve been to school many, many times. The first few times I found it exhilarating and engaging. I was completely immersed in it, as you say. But yes, over time it does lose some of its luster. Long ago I lost the desire to meet and experience new people. I imagine that this will be a fun challenge, and I’m actually quite curious to see how it goes. But no, I’m not doing this because I have a passion for cooking or because I particularly need human friends. I am doing this because I love watching you learn new things about yourself, because I relish seeing you grow and develop, and because I absolutely cannot stand to not be involved in every big event in your life.”

His eyes grew slightly hungry and anxious he brushed some hair off of my cheek. “So I ask you again, isn’t that enough? You are my adventure. I’ve waited so long for you. Everything with you is new to me.”

One of the things that I really love about this story is how Lola hasn’t forgotten where they came from. These characters are canon. They went through what Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse Bella and Edward went through. They haven’t forgotten Edward leaving Bella, and luckily neither has Lola.

This is one of my favorite scenes, ever:

describe your high school experience in four words.”

“Edward Please Fuck Me.” She held up a finger for each word and laughed victoriously.

Bella hasn’t forgotten how much she wanted Edward, and neither have we. They’re so playful and fun:

She giggled underneath me. “Edward, why did we come out here?”

“To see the campus. To talk about orientation tomorrow.”

“And what are we talking about?”

“The fact that I’m about ten seconds from sliding inside you.” I slipped her yoga pants from her hips and she kicked them off. My fingers slid up between us to touch her bare flesh.

She groaned and spread her legs for me, reaching to unzip my pants. “How are we going to do this?”

I ignored the real question, instead stifling a groan as I felt her fingers slide underneath my boxers. “I’m going to move my cock in and out of you, and you’re going to like it.”

Holy fuck, I love Blissward. I love that even though the lemons are amazingly hot (how could they not be with Lola in charge), that is always, always secondary to who they are and who they are in each other. No other writer makes me feel this way. And for that, I am thankful to LolaShoes for This Hungry World.

My Yes, My No by LolaShoes

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5366705/1/My_Yes_My_No


Official Description: On the plane back from Volterra, Edward asks, “Have I hurt you too much?” One Bella says yes; one Bella says no. Parallel stories in alternating chapters explore how these two reactions can influence the reunion and rebuilding of trust after Edward left.


MF’er says: I am seething right now because I spent like an hour yesterday writing my rec and now it’s disappeared. I’m totally giving Blogger the finger at the moment, in your honor of course, LolaShoes.

I jumped into My Yes, My No on the first chapter, anxious to see what the brilliant author of both Let Your Light Shine and A Life Extraordinary would have to offer us! I thoroughly enjoyed the adventures of Blissward (as I’m sure we ALL did) but this is a much different story.

The ending of New Moon caused a lot of people to wonder what Bella could have done differently and Lola is bringing those choices to light in MY,MN. Through alternating chapters after the plane ride home from Volterra, she’s showing us Bella’s Yes and Bella’s No.

Every chapter is just so beautifully written and lovely, that I’ve thus far been unable to choose which choice I think is the right path for either character. Each decision has such powerful pros and cons. Both choices are beautiful and emotional in their own ways. I cry, I smile and I’m hopeful for these two because I want them to work through what was easily glossed over in the original book.

I am completely looking forward to when the two choices come together and seeing where the future takes these two. Trust me when I say this is a must read!

Kassiah says: Everyone knows that I love and adore LolaShoes. She is a master storyteller and writes the hottest, most intense lemons ever. I cannot convey the emotions that she crafts with mere words; it’s like a phenomenon. She even has her own Word of the Day: the Lola Ratio. She is beyond amazing; she makes us feel. And she has come up with one of the most innovative and fantastic ways to tell a story.

Like the Official Description says, My Yes, My No begins on the plane on the way home from Volterra. SMeyer only wishes that she could have gotten into Bella’s head the way Lola has. Edward is kissing Bella’s hand, holding her, and telling her that he is so sorry for leaving her, for lying to her, and for breaking both of them. Chapter One ends:

“Bella, I made a terrible mistake.” He pressed his lips to my forehead. “Please, Bella, let me fix it. Let me put us back together.”

I stared at his eyes now and saw that I did, indeed, have that choice. I never expected to be given the option of taking Edward back. Furthermore, I never expected that the option would cause me any hesitation.

His face fell and his throat bobbed as he swallowed. “Am I too late? Have I hurt you too much?”

What follows is pure genius as Lola takes us through both of Bella’s options in two separate story-lines, first with her “No” response in the even chapters and then with her “Yes” response in the odds.

Chapter Two (Bella’s “No”) is heart-wrenching but is what we needed Bella to say and do in NM.

I longed to touch him, to feel his lips run down my jaw and along my neck. I wanted his arms around me, his voice in my ear whispering to me that everything would be fine. I wanted everything I missed while he was gone, everything I thought I would never have again.

But my head would not nod, my lips would not form the word ‘yes’. I loved him beyond reason, but there was too much doubt in my head now about what he meant by ‘love’. I wasn’t even sure that he knew what it meant. He could say the words but he didn’t know how to live by them.

To my surprise, I realized I was shaking my head ‘no’.

Chapter Three (Bella’s “Yes”) is amazing as well.

“Bella,” he whispered and he sounded desperate. It fueled my lust, fueled my confidence. He leaned back slightly, giving me the option of stepping out of his arms. “I don’t want to hold back, but I –”

“Please don’t,” I breathed, running my hands down his chest and back up over his shoulders, pulling myself against him. I stood on my toes and ran my nose along his jaw. “Please.”

I can’t express how much I want you to read this story. I want you to experience this for yourself so much. Although there has, of course, been no smexin’, this is Lola we are talking about. The mere words that Edward speaks to her are enough to set you aflame.

Being a total wussperv, I truly thought that I would want to skip over the “No” chapters. There’s anguish and heartbreak for sure. But more than that, there’s answers and healing. I find that the part of me that didn’t get enough from NM craves this part of this story. And I am shocked to say that I needed it. I have said before, no one tells a story like Lola. And this is a story that needed to be told.

Trust me when I say that you need to read My Yes, My No.

mozzer0906 says: This fic takes what many people cry foul at during the end of new moon and spins it two different ways. First it has Bella telling Edward, no. No, I won’t take you right back, no, I can’t just let you right back into my heart, no, I don’t want to be hurt again. Then it has her saying yes, but in a different way than she did in the books. They share more together than ever before; they give more of themselves to the other. This is the first thing I have read from lolashoes and it certainly won’t be the last. She has an amazing ability to convey such raw emotion through their actions and words to each other. And don’t even get me started on the simply ungh-worthy way she portrays their physical intimacy. I couldn’t agree with Kassiah more, you need to read this to experience the amazing world that lolashoes has crafted for Bella and Edward. A very strong recommendation from me for this fic.

Let Your Light Shine by LolaShoes

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4837355/1/Let_Your_Light_Shine

Official Description: My version of the honeymoon after Bella joined Edward in the water – this is what we all wanted to read! Edward opens up and let’s go of his fears.


MF’er says: Thank you, algonquinrt… for making the weekend bright by passing along the link to this piece of schmexellent reading. Definitely what some of us were hoping for when Breaking Dawn was released… Emphasis on the honeymoon, oh, and Bella’s change not including the whole uterus eating part. Romantic, fluffy… a tad dirty, and it has an unbelievable ending which leads us into the sequel. :D

Kassiah says: I was in the depths of emoVille when Algie rec’d this story and really, this is what brought me out of it. Like Madame said, this is just romantic fluffy goodness. I love it so much, you really need to read this, I mean…really. And save it in your favorites so that anytime you read something fluffy and sweet, you can pull it up.