http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4962588/1/Detruit
http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=4124


Official Description: “It’s all real. They did this, but I’m still here. Always, Bella. Find me.” Those cryptic words, whispered in a last breath, continue to haunt Bella Swan five years after the supposed death of her love, Edward Masen.

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MF’er says: Cupcake was pushing this story hard and of course I’m powerless to resist, hehe. I was not disappointed, from the prologue in I was intrigued and my mind was turning over and over trying to figure out what was happening. I was definitely shocked and thrown for a loop when the secret behind the plot was finally revealed. Trust me when I say if you like suspense, this is a story for you!

RedVelvetHeaven says: This is a nail biting, suspenseful story that once you get started it…you won’t be able to stop. Edward Masen was 16 when his whole life changed. His need for revenge brought him to Forks and in the path of Bella Swan. But he was not there for distraction, he had a job to do. Get it done, get his revenge and move on. But something happened to that plan…he fell in love. But the wheels were already in motion…the plans could not be changed, Edward Masen would no longer exist. Unaware of this alternate life, Bella falls in love with him too. However, when a car accident takes Edward from her, she struggles to recover and rebuild a life without him. Five years later….she still has not managed. Life is moving on, but she is not. The day Edward died he whispered to her…“It’s all real. They did this, but I’m still here, always, Bella. Find me.” These words have haunted her all these years. What happens when he reappears? What comes next will have you on the edge of your seat! Somah is kicking ass and taking names with this fuckawesome story!!! If you can avert your eyes away from the gun slinging hotness of her banner and actually get to the story….you will not be sorry! I can’t say enough about how much I love this fic!!

mozzer0906 says: I had been hearing from everyone about how good Detruit is – I have to say they were right. I love the way she builds suspense throughout the fic – suspense is very difficult to write and Somah does it very well. Your heart breaks for Bella and Edward as you read the pain they have experienced over the last five years. The plot is intricate and different – just when I think I’ve read everything in the fandom someone comes up with a unique idea and writes it perfectly. I am glad that the indie judges gave this fic a special merit award which hopefully will draw more attention to it.

Kassiah says: I can’t really add anything else to what Madame, mozzer and Red said. Just read it